Gauzy

The gauzy film coats all the trees Cobalt clouds look from sky Sun peeks through elongated slit All knowing seeing eye The gold and beams of light behind Those beautiful blue clouds Awaits its time to bloom forth bright Now they have very proud Golden sunlight radiant beams Morn of beauty and light Birds now happily sing praises Dove's cooing a delight Here and then gone slipped behind clouds Clouds, sun, clouds once again Never dull moment from nature This time storm is constrained Sunday, August 29, 2012

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Russell Sivey

Date: 7/29/2012 5:00:00 PM

The one line that stands out more than any other line in this poem has to be, "Never dull moment from nature" and this is such a fact! I couldn't have said it any better than you have stated it there! What a perfect line, fits your poem very nicely my friend! I really loved this piece! Great Work!!

Len Gasun

Date: 7/29/2012 8:33:00 AM

After coming back from a long holiday away from home, I finally have time again to read your poems in poetry soup. I love it and I enjoyed reading, Sarah. Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful day and take care always.-love leonora