Gathering of the Golden Girls - Soup Convention

Four “Golden Girls” seated at a table
Grey streaks our hair, but minds remain stable
     Convention is underway
     Michael has something to say
He opens our meeting with a fable
 
It’s about a tortoise that beats a hare
Some of the “fast writers” begin to glare
     Joyce, Francine and Barbara know
     It takes time for verse to grow
We’re the queens of rewriting; this we swear
 
Iolanda’s introduced to read her book
“Lava of my Soul,” no gobbledygook
     We’re mesmerized by each line
     At the end we toast with wine
Joyce says, “Now those words took some time to cook.”
 
It’s Karen’s turn to read “Silent Whispers”
We see tears falling into John’s whiskers
     “Tears of joy,” Francine exclaims
     For Karen’s Best Seller fame
Applause rings out from grateful listeners
 
After the “meet and greet” it’s nearly dawn
The crowd starts to thin as our comrades yawn
     Joyce, Francine call it a night
     But Barbara still sits upright
We two remain when most others are gone
 
One poet called us “Late Night Cockroaches”
This indignity did not encroach us 
     We call ourselves “LNCs”
     Awake in wee hours with ease
Waiting for our princes to approach us
 
That’s when the James Brothers draw near
Peranteau and Fraser, to make it clear
     With two erotic writers
     LNCs pull “all nighters”
Knowing that we can propose; it’s Leap Year!
 
 
*Entry for Michael’s “A Table of Four” contest
At my table: Carolyn Devonshire
Joyce Johnson
Francine Roberts
Barbara Gorelick
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Makama Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 11:55 AM
I choke with so much of your owe from this wonderful piece. You are a gem and blessed talent. Keep it up.
Maverick Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 1:06 PM
Best wishes on the great win Carolyn..
Onclaud Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 1:51 AM
a golden delight, carols..... best cheers for stunning win :) huggs!
Dietrich Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 6:31 PM
Congrats on this clever poem that I certainly can recall reading. A fun group to sit with!
Gorelick Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 6:30 PM
What a blast these old broads( excuse the expression..lol ) would have. My dear LNC..this cockroach couldnt have a better sister. Congrats. BG
Roberts Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 6:00 PM
congrats on your win, if only we could make it so
Taylor Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 5:11 PM
Congrats on your 2nd Place win, Carolyn. Great piece. Nice going. Enjoyed. Have a great Fourth. Thanks for your comments on my recent postings. luv Ralph
Johnson Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 3:25 PM
Sorry I conked out so early Carolyn. It was that long trip getting there. Congratulations on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce
Susan Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 11:47 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn. late night cockroaches is so funny.
Crisci Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 10:29 AM
My heartfelt congratulations Carolyn on your big win in Michael's contest! You have done it again! Your humor and intellect have blended together to make another magnificent poem! I wish continued success in your writing endeavors...you are my most admired poet on Soup. Have a wonderful Fourth of July weekend with your loved ones. Hugs, Andrew.
Richards Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 7:45 AM
A few grey streaks does not keep a girl from having fun!! Love this cheery poem, Carolyn....you would have a great time, no doubt about it!!!
Brown Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 7:37 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "A Table of Four" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
La France Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 7:02 AM
Beautiful poem, congratulations on your win~~
Mehta Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 6:54 AM
My congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Michael, Carolyn
Long Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 6:40 AM
congrats my friend with this win. cory
Falotico Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 6:32 AM
Congrats on your 2nd place win in my contest... warm and happy write....luv Michael
Peranteau Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 10:14 AM
What a fine entry dear Carolyn ! And I see that you have incited a many of readers with this write love ! I do feel blessed that you included myself in this write dear poet ! TY for this and for giving me a write to enjoy and start my day with ! Much blessings to you Carolyn, I pray alls well with you my dear friend ! Have a wonderful day....much love, james
Wesley Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 6:00 PM
Enjoyed this Carolyn, I picture your vivid descriptions
Neels Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 10:58 AM
I can just picture the James brothers having a blast even after some of the ladies has left.. Quite a stunning convention you had Carolyn.. I don't envy Michael in judging this contest ;) Maybe removing your top is not such a bad idea hey?? Lol.. I am praying that you get the go ahead for the MRI.. Love Wilma
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 4:50 PM
Interesting...well written and entertaining convention! Good luck in the contest. Lovingly, Dane Ann
K. Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 12:58 PM
NIce to see you back from your trip, Carolyn :) -- I hope all went well :) and this is such a delightful entry for the contest, wonderful poets to have at your table-- and I am also enlightened what LNC means-- always did wonder what it stood for-- won't that just be so amazing to have this convention come true? Smiles as I read this :) hugs
Mehta Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 5:19 AM
xcellent one Carolyn. These LNCs seem to be least irritable & repulsive. Best wishes for Michael's contest. Thanks for appreciative comments on "Joker". Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
Campi Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 2:46 AM
Hello Carolyn, Thanks for your comment on my "White Horse" poem, it came up from something I read or pictures I saw on wild mustangs. I am not a fisherman or a hunter, my wife is happy with that. Your poem was quite interesting. Take care and stay safe, Jancarl
Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 10:13 PM
You did really well with this one. I greatly admire your picks at your table. Late Night Cockroaches though. hmmm, nobody can claim THAT title but ME, Carolyn. I am the only one here at 3 a.m every other night. Believe me, I check it out and nobody from anybody's group is usually here then. hahaha. VERY cute poem. Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 4:04 PM
Brilliant piece and a wonderful entry. it seems you are back from the trip, Carolyn
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