Gathering Dust

Alone In her chair,
she rocks and rocks
through empty days.
Cracked picture frames
of memories on the mantle
gather dust, in the back drop 
of her life, where broken dreams
speak silent words, the bittersweet on display.

Thoughts of youth,  
still bring a heavy heart
and tears that never fall.
Instead of love, she settled
for his lust; lost, she felt his fist
more than his kiss until she knew
nothing but feelings of being numb, detached…
a young woman one day grew old overnight in an old chair, 
slowly rocking away the past…memories often coming too fast. 

In youth’s glow, she thought 
beauty would last forever…as time crept into fine 
crevices around her eyes, he grew tired of her, and she
thanked God every day for sanctity. Then, one day she didn’t.
Thick-skinned, loneliness settled on her neglected mantle. Middle-aged,
tired and starting over, she thought she had time to rediscover herself, her own
desires, but bitterness found a home. As years went by, she, too, gathered dust.  
Now layered In despair, she hides her loneliness and trust. With a life’s worth of broken dreams, each day may be her last. Sometimes, a heart disregarded is worth saving...sometimes, it’s too late.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/19/2015 3:50:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work.Sara
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Date: 3/19/2015 11:26:00 AM
Rhonda, Congratulations on your awesome gathering Dust win..... Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/19/2015 9:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win. I love reading your poems!
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Date: 3/16/2015 8:37:00 AM
Rhonda, an amazing portrait of how one's life can end up without hope and only bitterness to nurture their days. Wonderfully expressed. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/15/2015 7:59:00 PM
Oh my you must help her! Dust her off! Take her out! BIG HUGS!!! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/15/2015 3:34:00 PM
Rhonda, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/15/2015 2:12:00 PM
I echo John's comment. Do you ever write stories, short or otherwise ? It seems you would be very good at it. Congrats. BG
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 3/17/2015 4:06:00 AM
I tried writing short stories In high school and a little in college. I enjoy it but my perfectionism makes writing stories a long process. I enjoy writing poetry more...thanks for the encouraging words. You never know, maybe one day I'll try again :))
Date: 3/15/2015 12:00:00 PM
Rhonda, this poem painted such a picture of abuse and loneliness and the aftermath of such unthinkable relationships. The final line: "sometimes, a heart disregarded is worth saving...sometimes, it's too late." is chilling. Thank you for participating in the contest.
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Date: 3/15/2015 11:34:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/8/2015 5:19:00 PM
A heart-wrenching piece, Rhonda. I don't like to pick only a line or two because the entire piece is so well penned, but the lines, 'Instead of love, she settled/for his lust,' were so simple but so powerful!
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Date: 3/7/2015 7:38:00 AM
Wow! Powerful and emotional. It hums with a haunting sadness.
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Date: 3/3/2015 6:54:00 AM
Well done you managed a poem for that competition. I couldn't up with anything. Best of luck.
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Date: 3/2/2015 7:34:00 AM
Powerful emotionals work that reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 3/1/2015 11:05:00 PM
Such a powerful dramatic write, I loved this, and I saved it to read this again!!! The romantic in me wishes all hearts can be saved!
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Date: 3/1/2015 10:20:00 PM
…memories often coming too fast..I can feel it Rhonda..they overpower my thoughts...powerful write. God bless
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Date: 3/1/2015 9:24:00 PM
Abuse and violence take a heavy toll upon a person's soul . . . . there is heavy scar tissue upon this heart . . . your poem captures the essence of this desolate heart. 7
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Date: 3/1/2015 5:04:00 PM
Very powerful write, Rhonda! You feel the sadness and despair in this. A 7!
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Date: 3/1/2015 4:15:00 PM
Wow - exceptional Rhonda. Loved every word, poetry sublime. GL
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Date: 3/1/2015 9:20:00 AM
Hi Rhonda: A very poignant poem. I loved it!
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Date: 3/1/2015 7:52:00 AM
- Oh, dear Rhonda a deeply moving poem !!! - Beautifully written - I wish you a lovely Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/1/2015 3:44:00 AM
Such intense imagery of the past Rhonda I found this so so sad. the final stanza is simply heartbreaking:-( Hugs Jan good luck in the contest:-) xxx 7 xxx
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