Gathered Pieces of a One-Time Life-W

"Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces" 

                                           John Ruskin, 1853 



In my younger days thought much about fame
And went on laying the edifice of prosperity
That envisioned in the clear light of eternity
And might properly house the glory of my name.

But thoughts swifter than wind pushed my plan
Though the fair foundation has yet begun
And started with friends dallying in the sun
Scrambling awkwardly and the liquors ran.

Was too late to see my vision shape and rise
In the place of lofty peaks and towers.
Mind’s pieces drifted the conscious premise
Drowned by flotsam-jetsam in sluggish currents.

Later friends gulled and well-wishers deceived
And now have no regrets, nothing unachieved
Fragments left me to collect the pieces together
Spending all my time of bliss at ease forever.

                         **********

*This is not biographical write but based on the life of my childhood friend.
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Dr. Ram Mehta
June 24, 2011

Sixth Place win:
Contest: All the Little Pieces sponsored by Constance, The Rambling Poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/29/2011 2:32:00 PM
So happy to see the win in Constance's contest Dr Ram, congratulations..! (elegant scribe)
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Date: 6/29/2011 5:59:00 AM
nice read Dr. Ram. congrats on your win
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Date: 6/27/2011 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "All The Little Pieces" contest Dr. Ram. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 2:05:00 PM
sir, you are a real magician. you transform each sentence into these beautiful poetic lines that rhyme... it seems i've to learn a lot of things from you.
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Date: 6/26/2011 10:05:00 AM
Many congrats, Dr Ram : )
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Date: 6/26/2011 12:33:00 AM
So happy to see this on the WINNERS list, Dr. Ram. Many congrats. Lainie
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Date: 6/25/2011 8:32:00 AM
Wowww... You've created a very good writing on one's life... cool, Dr. Ram. Congrats on your win too :)
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Date: 6/25/2011 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Doc I love this one
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Date: 6/25/2011 5:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win in Constance's contest, fantastic write...luv Shannon
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Date: 6/25/2011 5:32:00 AM
This is amazing Dr. Ram. It seemed like my life. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 6/24/2011 11:34:00 PM
Beautifully worded. The essence is nice based on the life of your childhood friend. bl
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Date: 6/24/2011 10:49:00 PM
another crown of a poem from you … perky cheers for the amazing award, dr. ram!! :) huggs
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:42:00 PM
A big congratulations to you in this contest, Dr. Ram.
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Date: 6/24/2011 3:56:00 PM
Excellent and profound write.. congrats on your win my Poet friend....Michael
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Date: 6/24/2011 3:32:00 PM
congrats Dr. Ram on your terrific win..having read this only this morning I can see why it won so grand in the contest.. enjoy my friend with luv.. poetic art..
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Date: 6/24/2011 2:41:00 PM
This is a very attractive poem written with panache. Thanks for your comments..
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Date: 6/24/2011 10:43:00 AM
It's really sweet little pieces,Dr.RAM.Beautifully written for the contest.Hope you are well.
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Date: 6/24/2011 10:37:00 AM
Very, very nice..why does it so often take so long to get to that time of bliss..for me, it comes and goes...BG
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Date: 6/24/2011 9:04:00 AM
an elegant write Dr. Ram.. life experience makes the finest lines in poetry..luv.. see Constance's rules.. u must add her beginning line and John Rusken 1853 to your opening line my friend.. her computer just died so u have time luv.. she is frantic.. using library one for time ...
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Date: 6/24/2011 9:02:00 AM
Very touching and beautifully written, Dr. Ram. Elaine
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Date: 6/24/2011 9:01:00 AM
An excellent piece my friend. I see young, immortal people whiling away their youth in games and folly while dreaming dreams of grandeur but doiung nothibng to acheive it. Time passes and though some get up and do something to earn it others look back and wonder wheere the time went. Very good. God Bless, JB Moral: Don't waste your time. You only get once chance at life.
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:58:00 AM
touched, dr.ram... was meaning to tell you i mentioned you in soup safari... hope you didnlt mind; oh how i woukd love to see you dance with respect! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/24/2011 7:59:00 AM
Always inspired by your words.Great job.And luck to you.Thanks for your kind comment on my recent win..Good day to you sincerely.....
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