Gate of Undefined Infinity

“Fear of death is fear of surrender to Infinity.” ~ Adi Da Samraj In my fevered state, I sought the godforsaken sounds of the gossamer strings of the harp. It was hours of grave thoughts before I would awaken to the ghostly groaning of my mind’s steep scarp. Grief-stricken, I lie staring through closed eyes listening to the beat of my heart echoing from the silent monitor, praying the future that it belies pushes me toward the gate of undefined infinity. God knows what grand or ghastly fate awaits my soul, with grim gargoyles adorning the path down gnarled gardens toward and through ornate gates. Will this be my entryway to salvation or wrath?
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La France Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 9:41 PM
Linda, congratulations on your win in my contest, Gate/Gates Contest. Your poem is wonderfully penned. And I love the quote, Constance
Fowler Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 6:49 AM
Many thanks Constance. Always a pleasure to participate in your contests. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Gate of Undefined Infinity" write/story again. I have been off the computer for a few days. Have a blessed day with your win.............
Fowler Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 8:49 AM
Thanks Paula. hugs! :)
Crandall Avatar
July 14, 2025 at 3:48 PM
Great poem about the final unknown. I liked the image of the gossamer harp strings.
Fowler Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 8:49 AM
Thanks Dave! :)
Kitchin Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 6:13 AM
Linda, a great poem, congratulations on your winning placement.
Fowler Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 8:27 AM
Thanks Tania. Good to see you. :)
George Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 5:53 AM
There is always uncertainty at the gate.... We are not sure if it is a gate opening to salvation or perdition. Well done, dear friend. Congratulations on your win.
Fowler Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 8:27 AM
Hey Valsa. Always appreciate your visits and comments. Thanks for the congrats! :)
Andresen Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 5:10 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in the contest, Linda :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 10:41 AM
Many thanks dear Anne-Lise. hugs :)
Greenhough Avatar
July 6, 2025 at 7:12 PM
I enjoyed your poem . The future beckons.
Fowler Avatar
July 9, 2025 at 5:44 AM
Thank you Hilda. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2025 at 6:01 AM
Well done!
Fowler Avatar
July 6, 2025 at 10:27 AM
Many thanks Kim :)
Hind Avatar
July 5, 2025 at 1:10 PM
This is very deep, and intriguing. Leaves behind, though dark, a sense of wonder -
Fowler Avatar
July 6, 2025 at 10:27 AM
Thank you Paige! :)
Gasun Avatar
July 4, 2025 at 7:05 PM
A very creatively written poem with tint of sadness my dear poet friend, Linda. Sometimes doubts and murkiness come into our hearts and mind. Superbly written dear. I love it and so enjoyed. Good luck and best winning wishes. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs.
Fowler Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 9:39 AM
Missed this comment until just now dear Len. So sorry! And so happy that you enjoyed this read. Thank you! Hugs and blessings dear one! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 4, 2025 at 1:23 PM
A captivating write, well done.
Fowler Avatar
July 4, 2025 at 6:05 PM
Thank you Richard. I appreciate your continued support. :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2025 at 9:12 PM
Very nicely done, Linda. Gloomy imagery was great here
Fowler Avatar
July 4, 2025 at 6:06 AM
Appreciated Andrea. That's what I was going for. :)
George Avatar
July 3, 2025 at 5:04 AM
We are not sure if we will enter the gate to salvation or of wrath. This confusion makes death one of dread and anxiety. As thoughts of uncertainty plagues us, our heart may race in fear. Great entry for the contest.
Fowler Avatar
July 3, 2025 at 6:32 AM
Yes Valsa. Many people fear. We are even so many conflicting "stories" of death and the beyond. We should not fear, for more adventure awaits! Thanks for your kind and supportive comments. :)
Baker Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 6:15 PM
The imagery was inviting and mystery kept me engaged, Linda. With the highlighted words, me thinks it may be for a contest. If so, good luck, my friend. Bill
Fowler Avatar
July 3, 2025 at 6:29 AM
Hello dear friend. Yes, this is for Constance's Gate(s) contest Bill. Many thanks for your comments and encouragement. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 12:10 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Gate of Undefined Infinity" write/story. Love the ending... "Good Luck" I also did this one. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..........
Fowler Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 1:15 PM
Thank you dear Paula. I enjoyed my walk through your gate as well - well done monrhyme! hugs :)
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