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Gate of Undefined Infinity

“Fear of death is fear of surrender to Infinity.” ~ Adi Da Samraj In my fevered state, I sought the godforsaken sounds of the gossamer strings of the harp. It was hours of grave thoughts before I would awaken to the ghostly groaning of my mind’s steep scarp. Grief-stricken, I lie staring through closed eyes listening to the beat of my heart echoing from the silent monitor, praying the future that it belies pushes me toward the gate of undefined infinity. God knows what grand or ghastly fate awaits my soul, with grim gargoyles adorning the path down gnarled gardens toward and through ornate gates. Will this be my entryway to salvation or wrath?

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Date: 7/3/2025 5:04:00 AM
We are not sure if we will enter the gate to salvation or of wrath. This confusion makes death one of dread and anxiety. As thoughts of uncertainty plagues us, our heart may race in fear. Great entry for the contest.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/3/2025 6:32:00 AM
Yes Valsa. Many people fear. We are even so many conflicting "stories" of death and the beyond. We should not fear, for more adventure awaits! Thanks for your kind and supportive comments. :)
Date: 7/2/2025 6:15:00 PM
The imagery was inviting and mystery kept me engaged, Linda. With the highlighted words, me thinks it may be for a contest. If so, good luck, my friend. Bill
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/3/2025 6:29:00 AM
Hello dear friend. Yes, this is for Constance's Gate(s) contest Bill. Many thanks for your comments and encouragement. :)
Date: 7/2/2025 12:10:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Gate of Undefined Infinity" write/story. Love the ending... "Good Luck" I also did this one. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..........
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/2/2025 1:15:00 PM
Thank you dear Paula. I enjoyed my walk through your gate as well - well done monrhyme! hugs :)

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