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July 5, 2025

For the contest, "Gate of Gates" by Constance La France

Gate for the Dead

Built in the middle of Nowhere,
A gate of turquoise, very rare,
A sculptor carved a figurehead,
The gate was built to guard the dead.

It's best to come on full-moon night,
for the dead don't care for sunlight.
GHOSTLY music is often heard,
And one unidentified word.

It's said, on a September date,
GROANING is heard near the big gate.
GRIEF-STRICKEN singing to the crowd?
Even here, I think not allowed.

Perhaps, in that spot you call GRAVE,
Was, all along, a gateman's slave.
Although GOSSAMER clouds float by,
A GODFORSAKEN place to die!
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Date: 8/19/2025 9:52:00 PM
Ann, congratulations on your win in my contest, Gate/Gates Contest. Your poem is well done and I like it. Constance
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Ann Peck
Date: 8/20/2025 2:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance! It was such a good topic!
Date: 7/19/2025 11:21:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Gate for the Dead" write/story again. I have been off the computer for a few days. Have a blessed day with your win................
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/3/2025 5:20:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Paula. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 7/13/2025 6:21:00 PM
Congrats, Ann! Loved that first verse!
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/3/2025 5:23:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. I love fun contests like that :)
Date: 7/12/2025 9:06:00 AM
Best to stay home during a full mon, it seems. :) Congratulations Ann! :)
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/3/2025 5:26:00 PM
And pull the covers over your head :) Thanks, Linda
Date: 7/11/2025 5:04:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in the contest, Ann :) - hugs
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/3/2025 5:29:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise! So much fun to write about spooky things (and then run-hide)
Date: 7/6/2025 9:26:00 AM
What a wonderful "Gate for the Dead" write/story you have here. Great last line. It sure would be. "Good Luck" I also did this contest. Have a blessed day writing away.........
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Ann Peck
Date: 7/6/2025 9:56:00 AM
Thanks so much, Paula! Tough words to form poetry around! Good luck!
Date: 7/6/2025 1:51:00 AM
The gate seems to be in Gaza now, powerful poem.
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Ann Peck
Date: 7/6/2025 10:01:00 AM
Yes, it does, and it's very sad. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 7/5/2025 9:10:00 PM
Wow Ann that's a hauntingly scary poem...l absolutely love it! So well written and leaving me with a real restless feel! Debx
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Ann Peck
Date: 7/6/2025 12:02:00 PM
Oh good! I'm so glad is haunting! It pretty much had to be with the words she gave us! Just don't go there when moon is full! :)
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