Gaseous Moon

There was a moon man from Titan
Who out gased who ever he was fightin'
When his eyes saw red
He blew off his head
And anyone near him was lightnin'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Loving Iii Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 5:37 PM
sometimes i talk to Him. and while i'm talking He'll say something funny. and sometimes i say something funny. i can't tell you if he laughs. but i can tell you this; God has told a few punch lines that were really funny. duck. john
Culverhouse Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 5:00 PM
enjoyed
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 1:18 PM
Hahaha, this one is wild, Deb. Is it the one for the contest? Luv ya, Andrea
Flaherty Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 11:20 AM
Hi Deborah, I have been reading some of your recent writting and in hoamge i wrote , Ladies in answer to your Questiom , I hope you Enjoy Love Chris
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 4:50 AM
Deborah, Thank you for your most welcomed recent comments on my blog. “Another quick SURVEY- Is Monoku for you?” It was definitely fun to read the diverse responses. (A gaseous moon man...ha, ha.) XOXOX Dane Ann
Moreno Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 3:43 AM
Great sense of humor DG, loved this one...Raul
Gorelick Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 8:07 PM
Good one! I love these limericks..this one is so funny. BG
Sweetheart Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 8:02 PM
In Ninja Turtle form: U made a "funny" .. and a good funny too... good luck in the new contest... this one is a GAS.. ah.. pardon the pun..hon..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Kendrick Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 5:39 PM
Great out of space Limerick that should do well in the contest if you have entered it...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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