Garments On the Ground

Just wonderful, I have some of those burlsque trees also outside my window~~ thanks for commenting on my poetry~~

Very nice Francine. A great Tanka. Thank you for commenting. Love, Joyce

I definitely enjoyed how you portrayed autumn here!! How unique! --nikko ;)

soon these will be winter garments cause weasther sure has tured it's new leaf enjoyed the read and imagery in this one if this is for a contest this should do very very well thanks also for your kind comments to my works this sickness is just to much to bear I was sick again thursday and friday but me a fighter to the end keep up the great writing I will be back soon thanks again for the read blessings

What a wonderful image described by your second line. Keep that creative pen flowing. Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.

ooh la la la. An awesome little TAnka, this one is! LUv, Andrea

Enjoyed reading this very descriptive Tanka..Glad that I chose this one to read..Sara

Francine what a beautiful and unique Tanka ;)

very nice enjoyed and thanks for your kind comments and have a great weekend faleshia

A unique and creative perspective on fall, Francine! Enjoyed your poem very much. Tanka you, love, Carolyn

Nice Tanka Francine. Nature with a sensuous twist, very clever >> James

good take on shedding leaves you have a fresh perception on life and I like it!!

A nice way to welcome the Fall and goodbye to the summer, Francine

I like your comparisons..very unique..Take care~Deb

Wonderful Francine, this shows unique thinking, and so well put together, it is very expressive indeed. Love it ! Gordon, (hicky)

enjoyed your poem,..p.d.