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Garments On the Ground

Branches shedding leaves, Undressing before the wind. Nature's burlesque show. All modesty forgotten, Leaves on the ground like garments.

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Constance La France

Date: 9/20/2010 4:04:00 PM

Just wonderful, I have some of those burlsque trees also outside my window~~ thanks for commenting on my poetry~~

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/20/2010 11:36:00 AM

Very nice Francine. A great Tanka. Thank you for commenting. Love, Joyce

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/19/2010 11:11:00 AM

I definitely enjoyed how you portrayed autumn here!! How unique! --nikko ;)

Katherine Stella

Date: 9/18/2010 6:55:00 AM

soon these will be winter garments cause weasther sure has tured it's new leaf enjoyed the read and imagery in this one if this is for a contest this should do very very well thanks also for your kind comments to my works this sickness is just to much to bear I was sick again thursday and friday but me a fighter to the end keep up the great writing I will be back soon thanks again for the read blessings

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 9/17/2010 9:58:00 PM

What a wonderful image described by your second line. Keep that creative pen flowing. Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.