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Garlanding

the waves garland these regal rocks with soft blossoms of white fluffy froth above faintly woven skies the moon is a mute witness April.20.2022 A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/26/2022 8:45:00 AM

Ah, so brilliantly penned, subtle and pretty.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2022 11:17:00 AM

wow, gotta fave this one. It's an excellently written tanka.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/21/2022 10:52:00 AM

great imagery, Valsa, good luck in Brian's contest. Thank you for reading my verse. Blessings my friend

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/20/2022 11:37:00 PM

Beautiful visual tanka, Valsa.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/20/2022 6:43:00 PM

Your vision is sterling, Valsa. Never would have perceived a garland of frothy waves. Bravo! Waves and Waterfalls, Gershon

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/20/2022 11:24:00 AM

The moon may be mute, but it still has its pull . . . .Aloha!

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/20/2022 10:44:00 AM

Valsa, you've captured the essence of imagery in a concise and precise manner. Your writing is unique.

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/20/2022 9:31:00 AM

Dear Valsa, your vivid imagery captures my heart's imagination. I adore the sea foam being compared to soft blossoms, showing the serene side to the mighty force waves can be when riled and roiled. The moon as a mute witness adds to the twilight tranquility of this exquisite tanka. Warmest wishes, my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 4/20/2022 7:58:00 AM

Charming write~your imagery masterful. :)Paulette

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/20/2022 6:41:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I enjoyed reading your work. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara

Anil Deo

Date: 4/20/2022 5:35:00 AM

I read this hours ago, but back with comment: line 3 is my favorite, & maybe sonunique, it's never been said before: the surf foam makes snow like blossoms on shore. PTL

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/20/2022 4:59:00 AM

Wonderful imagery succinctly conveyed, Valsa. A creative write.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/20/2022 3:46:00 AM

Love the imagery Valsa, best of luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/20/2022 1:28:00 AM

Lovely if short and cute poem. Packed with imagery. I never enter Strand's contest. For some reason we are not on the same wave length. Best for a win.