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Garlanding

the waves garland these
regal rocks with soft blossoms
of white fluffy froth
above faintly woven skies 
the moon is a mute witness


April.20.2022
A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 4/26/2022 8:45:00 AM Ah, so brilliantly penned, subtle and pretty. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/23/2022 11:17:00 AM wow, gotta fave this one. It's an excellently written tanka. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 4/21/2022 10:52:00 AM great imagery, Valsa, good luck in Brian's contest. Thank you for reading my verse. Blessings my friend Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 4/20/2022 11:37:00 PM Beautiful visual tanka, Valsa. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 4/20/2022 6:43:00 PM Your vision is sterling, Valsa. Never would have perceived a garland of frothy waves. Bravo! Waves and Waterfalls, Gershon Login to Reply

Rico Leffanta Date: 4/20/2022 11:24:00 AM The moon may be mute, but it still has its pull . . . .Aloha! Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 4/20/2022 10:44:00 AM Valsa, you've captured the essence of imagery in a concise and precise manner. Your writing is unique. Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 4/20/2022 9:31:00 AM Dear Valsa, your vivid imagery captures my heart's imagination. I adore the sea foam being compared to soft blossoms, showing the serene side to the mighty force waves can be when riled and roiled. The moon as a mute witness adds to the twilight tranquility of this exquisite tanka. Warmest wishes, my sweet friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Paulette Calasibetta Date: 4/20/2022 7:58:00 AM Charming write~your imagery masterful. :)Paulette Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/20/2022 6:41:00 AM Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I enjoyed reading your work. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara Login to Reply

Anil Deo Date: 4/20/2022 5:35:00 AM I read this hours ago, but back with comment: line 3 is my favorite, & maybe sonunique, it's never been said before: the surf foam makes snow like blossoms on shore. PTL Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 4/20/2022 4:59:00 AM Wonderful imagery succinctly conveyed, Valsa. A creative write. Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 4/20/2022 3:46:00 AM Love the imagery Valsa, best of luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well. Tom Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 4/20/2022 1:28:00 AM Lovely if short and cute poem. Packed with imagery. I never enter Strand's contest. For some reason we are not on the same wave length. Best for a win. Login to Reply