Garlanding

Ah, so brilliantly penned, subtle and pretty.

wow, gotta fave this one. It's an excellently written tanka.

great imagery, Valsa, good luck in Brian's contest. Thank you for reading my verse. Blessings my friend

Beautiful visual tanka, Valsa.

Your vision is sterling, Valsa. Never would have perceived a garland of frothy waves. Bravo! Waves and Waterfalls, Gershon

The moon may be mute, but it still has its pull . . . .Aloha!

Valsa, you've captured the essence of imagery in a concise and precise manner. Your writing is unique.

Dear Valsa, your vivid imagery captures my heart's imagination. I adore the sea foam being compared to soft blossoms, showing the serene side to the mighty force waves can be when riled and roiled. The moon as a mute witness adds to the twilight tranquility of this exquisite tanka. Warmest wishes, my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Charming write~your imagery masterful. :)Paulette

Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I enjoyed reading your work. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara

I read this hours ago, but back with comment: line 3 is my favorite, & maybe sonunique, it's never been said before: the surf foam makes snow like blossoms on shore. PTL

Wonderful imagery succinctly conveyed, Valsa. A creative write.

Love the imagery Valsa, best of luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Lovely if short and cute poem. Packed with imagery. I never enter Strand's contest. For some reason we are not on the same wave length. Best for a win.