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Gardens of Life

In reality we are all gardeners, wandering through the gardens of life gently placing our seeds into the mouth of the Earth. Drifting through seasons, anticipating the first glimpse of Spring's splendour of sights a new promise, a new beginning, a new love. Butterflies and bees, make love to the fragility of blossoms - embellishing nature's passions. In my personal oasis, princess of petals plants her love, within the garden of my heart. Fragrance of her flower garden, leaves me silently breathless, as we bloom in the vapours of our love. Yet not all gardens are sincere. Wilted path of premature petals, leads to an unkempt province. Walloping weeds wander through naked rose stems with blood thirsty thorns and I wonder, dismayed, why anyone would neglect their garden, when did cultivation become a crime? So I remain, away from the darkness, upon the silent bed of our own roses, content with the honeysuckle, suckling and soothing our souls.
Silent One Simple Musing 27 July 2019
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Crabtree Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 4:07 PM
Nicely written, Silent One. The Garden of Love... :)
Kerr Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 4:13 AM
An elegant work displaying sincere and intense mastery, Silent One. Thanks for your compliment on my poem Granddad Join Us. Howard
Devnath  Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 10:52 AM
Beautiful poem my dear friend read from.
Ligon Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 9:43 AM
Gardening is my favorite hobby. Great metaphor and visuals.
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 5:41 PM
love the metaphors in this one. My kind of poetry ,Silent One!
Delaney Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 4:31 PM
Nice to read your words again Si: A beautiful metaphor for love and life. SuZ
Dutta Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 1:10 AM
So nice as usual. Blessing to Truly Talented Poet.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 4:47 PM
Hello Silent One, you have looking at a garden differently now. Have a nice evening my friend.
Arowolo Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 5:48 PM
Wonderful piece. Nice write, great poet..kudos to you.
DiMino Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 10:33 AM
Well said; reminds of something an old (strange--that's me now), wise person once told me. God takes care of the birds but he doesn't throw seed in their nests. Therefore, with a little effort, in fact the joy of co-creating is a miracle of omnipotence that is ours to freely take part in if we so wisely choose. Love the photography as well. Great job!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 4:21 PM
Your expressive metaphors make clear what is important in honoring those loved ones and nurturing them with tender loving care. This is lovely Silent! : ) xxoo
Proxenos Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 12:22 PM
Such a clever poem- as gardeners we sew the seeds of faith, but are we all genuine and sincere, or do we allow the weeds to creep in. An absolute fav. for me. Thank-you for sharing. Hugs, Jennifer.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 9:51 AM
I enjoyed strolling through your garden.
Papyrus Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 3:06 PM
Still potent as ever. The lesson planted will blossom in the reader!
Breidenthal Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 5:45 AM
Wonderful masterpiece. :) thanks for sharing and thank you for your awesome comment on my poem. -JWE
Riabi Dziri Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 11:54 AM
I am in the gardens of your poetry.. reveling in the beauty of your words.. enjoying the Musings of your silent poetry.. delighted to see in your oasis blooming souls embracing Life in contentment.. So beautiful and captivating your garden of beauty, love and light, Silent One! So amazed by your artistry and genuineness! Definitely in my fave list.. A great pleasure to read your poetry. My deepest regards. Blessings.
Nicole Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 8:46 PM
I feel your heart in every word. You are holding the one you love so close- her petals are so bright and beautiful. You could never pollute another garden. There are so many moments within, emotions tangling each other. Truth about life and love combine here in your words. ~ Brandy
Warrior Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 8:55 AM
Brilliant as always my Silent friend...gardens are the spice of life...for me, natures palettes...sending poetic flowers lol...^WW^ :o)
Bambi The Word Artist  Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 2:52 PM
Thank you, I smiled from start to finish.
Callus Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 3:05 PM
Metaphorically delightful and meaningful, S-1. Unfortunately, not all those who have gardens make good gardeners! ~ Regards // paul
Williams Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 12:31 AM
'In reality we are all gardners wandering through the gardens of life'. How very true, a simple analogy, yet so complex at the same time. "There is more pleasure in making a garden than in contemplating a paradise." - Anne Scott-James. And if I can add to that it inspires amazing poetry like yours. A fave as always....Maria Hugs
Adams Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 8:43 PM
This is gorgeous...love the message within and the vivid images and the subtle touches of romance in there....nicely penned my friend :) hugs
Onclaud Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 7:19 PM
splendid poem like the soil of earth, S.O!... bloom on; huggs
Ashley Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 3:27 PM
What a great first line! You leave me breathless, Silent One, as you cultivate metaphoric and passionate beauty in your gardens of poetry. A deep, stunning and sensual delight. Great last line too for a grand finale. Warmest wishes always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
One Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 3:44 PM
Thank you for your kind words Susan, glad you liked it..
Gondolf Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 2:12 PM
A lovely verse on life and love, SO, with a hint of sensuality. Nicely penned my friend. John
One Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 3:44 PM
Thank you John, nice to see you..
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