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Gardenias Reminding Me

The sun was brightly shining the morning when he left. Gardenias reminding me, of my father’s death. I was about a child of four, when sirens rang in war. Though fifty years, not rid of tears the charge of distant fears. How mother’s heart was weeping, the day the message gave. In requiem guns were singing; white flowers on his grave. Remembering the day his eyes first flickered into light. Feeling all his human cries; so glad in his delight. Man, here, not contented. Again the sirens rang. With arms a-well presented, his bugle proudly sang. The sun was brightly shining the morning when he left. Gardenias reminding me, of my baby’s death.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/18/2015 9:56:00 PM
Goosevumps !!Yes your poem has such an effect on me.I do love Gardenias too.
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Gavin Joachims
Date: 6/19/2015 4:01:00 AM
Thanks Charmaine! At times I write of things that I do not know where the stories come from. This is one such poem...I hope that one day I find the person(s). Gives me goose-bumps every time I read it too (I love gardenias too :) have a wonderful weekend!

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