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Gardener's Revenge

fat tomato bug leafless bush and eaten fruit fish for supper

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Gordon Hickman

Date: 10/4/2010 1:05:00 AM

This sort of poem, (haiku?) saves a lot of time and ink doesn't it? It's not my favoutite style, but it certainly is briefly explicit. and I do like this one. Many thanks for visiting and your 'knotty' comments Gordon Hickman, (hicky)

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/1/2010 5:06:00 PM

Hi Doris, fish for supper won't be too bad so! Here I cannot grow tomatoes, but there a re nice ones in the supermarkets. I do love tomato salad with onions and balsamico vinegar. Or even diced tomatoes only with salt and pepper together with an omlette is nice. Recently I had fish and chips!!! The best ones you can get in Great Britain! Thank you for your kind comments!...Gert

Daver Austin

Date: 10/1/2010 6:27:00 AM

Just you be sure that there tomato bug hasn't crawled into your clothing, hence dropped into the fish stew. Good to hear from you, Doris and thanks for reading Moon Morgans. You don't know what Moon Morgans are? Well, they only appear at Halloween and only to weird people like myself. Love, Dave