Garden Wren

 
in my garden amidst the flowers and hanging baskets I notice a wren bouncing around, busy, eating, exploring the bird does not stand out but blends in with brownish hues you usually have to look close to see a little garden wren you cannot entice them with seeds, no way, they want worms even a bug will do, oh, they do like suet hanging from a tree they will do knee bends and bob their heads when disturbed and have quite an exuberant voice, and never stop moving their song is so beautiful that it echoes among my flowers and among my hanging baskets of trailing vines and blooms sometimes, in the winter, little wrens sing at my window saying hello in a song ... 'time to get up sleepy head' ~~ _______________________ May 28, 2023 Poetry/Free Verse/Garden Wren Copyright Protected, ID 05-1550-402-28 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

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Date: 5/31/2023 7:02:00 AM
A joyful poem! Speaks of Spring and its marvel!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/31/2023 7:19:00 AM
kim, thank you so much for the lovely compliment !
Date: 5/30/2023 9:03:00 PM
A garden with the birds and butterflies flitting around and singing is always a delightful scene. Love your description of the wren that merge with the surroundings ! Lovely poem. All the Best in the contest, dear Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/31/2023 7:20:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the wonderful comment, compliment and encouragement !
Date: 5/30/2023 3:04:00 PM
Magical moments are created by this beautiful poem, matched with the wren's lovely song. :)
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Constance La France
Date: 5/31/2023 7:20:00 AM
Evelyn, thank you so much for the compliment !
Date: 5/29/2023 6:24:00 PM
nice things I learned from your sweet poem. It is most deserving of a win i hope you got.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/30/2023 1:40:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, I had one sing for me all day .. today !
Date: 5/29/2023 6:43:00 AM
Love this, Constance! Gave me a smile!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/30/2023 1:41:00 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the love !
Date: 5/28/2023 5:03:00 PM
Beautiful glorious voice of praise, hopefully staying away from the cats : ). Hope you are doing great
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Date: 5/29/2023 6:39:00 AM
Stephan, thank you so much for the lovely compliment, I keep my cat close, I am doing well, thank you !
Date: 5/28/2023 9:11:00 AM
Your description of the little wrens bring them to life, Constance. They certainly do like to chirp.
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Date: 5/29/2023 6:40:00 AM
Lin, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, they sure do have a big voice for a little bird !
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