Garden Wren

 
in my garden amidst the flowers and hanging baskets I notice a wren bouncing around, busy, eating, exploring the bird does not stand out but blends in with brownish hues you usually have to look close to see a little garden wren you cannot entice them with seeds, no way, they want worms even a bug will do, oh, they do like suet hanging from a tree they will do knee bends and bob their heads when disturbed and have quite an exuberant voice, and never stop moving their song is so beautiful that it echoes among my flowers and among my hanging baskets of trailing vines and blooms sometimes, in the winter, little wrens sing at my window saying hello in a song ... 'time to get up sleepy head' ~~ _______________________ May 28, 2023 Poetry/Free Verse/Garden Wren Copyright Protected, ID 05-1550-402-28 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France
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Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 7:02 AM
A joyful poem! Speaks of Spring and its marvel!
La France Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 7:19 AM
kim, thank you so much for the lovely compliment !
George Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 9:03 PM
A garden with the birds and butterflies flitting around and singing is always a delightful scene. Love your description of the wren that merge with the surroundings ! Lovely poem. All the Best in the contest, dear Constance.
La France Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 7:20 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the wonderful comment, compliment and encouragement !
Buehler Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 3:04 PM
Magical moments are created by this beautiful poem, matched with the wren's lovely song. :)
La France Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 7:20 AM
Evelyn, thank you so much for the compliment !
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:24 PM
nice things I learned from your sweet poem. It is most deserving of a win i hope you got.
La France Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 1:40 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, I had one sing for me all day .. today !
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:43 AM
Love this, Constance! Gave me a smile!
La France Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 1:41 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the love !
McBride  Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 5:03 PM
Beautiful glorious voice of praise, hopefully staying away from the cats : ). Hope you are doing great
La France Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:39 AM
Stephan, thank you so much for the lovely compliment, I keep my cat close, I am doing well, thank you !
Lane Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 9:11 AM
Your description of the little wrens bring them to life, Constance. They certainly do like to chirp.
La France Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:40 AM
Lin, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, they sure do have a big voice for a little bird !
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