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Garden Spider

male garden spider
builds web entwining female's...
plucks her web~music

female spider writes
poetic caligraphy..
new z everyday 

Sponsor: Suzanne Delaney
Contest: Along Came A Spider
When we garden, I see
at least one of these females
in the garden..

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Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 6/29/2013 10:30:00 PM

Sara, wonderful spider poem, very tightly written. Congratulations.

Joseph May

Date: 6/21/2013 3:13:00 PM

very creative work Sara...congrats on your win

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/20/2013 5:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your haikus, Sara. Love, Joyce

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/20/2013 7:31:00 AM

Great congrats on your superb win, my friend. Loved always, bl

Donna Jones

Date: 6/11/2013 9:18:00 PM

Oooooooh..love this Sara......bet its among the winners....:-)

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/11/2013 12:13:00 PM

Beautiful observation lovely worded in haiku. Good luck my friend in the contest. Loved always, bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/10/2013 7:53:00 AM

Hi Sara love this, don't like spiders though xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/10/2013 7:33:00 AM

- Beautifully poem, Sara - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2013 11:12:00 AM

your poem is wonderful Sara, hope you are well...Lindahnx9

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/9/2013 7:37:00 AM

Excellent. Beautiful haiku. Very creative. Enjoyed. Tfs

Len Gasun

Date: 6/9/2013 6:38:00 AM

This is an amazing pair of haiku my dear friend Sara. I love them both. A winner for me. Thank you so much for sharing! Have a great weekend! love and big hugs, Leonora

Robert Pettit

Date: 6/7/2013 10:17:00 PM

Those arachnids are fascinating creatures. You have described them well here.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2013 12:25:00 AM

clever and creative, Sara!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/5/2013 10:53:00 PM

nice job you did here Sara ;}

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/5/2013 9:59:00 PM

Nice arachnid poem here. You handle the form very skillfully! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Simon S.

Date: 6/5/2013 12:49:00 PM

lovely haiku

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/5/2013 11:07:00 AM

Oh, I liked this a lot! Ah, indeed, how the poetic calligraphy encapsulates us.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/3/2013 2:17:00 PM

dear me, so original and vividly done, sara... one of your best, i must say!... incredible work!..:) huggs

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 6/3/2013 10:33:00 AM

awesome write my friend Sara. Good luck in the contest. Hugsss Maria

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/3/2013 1:02:00 AM

Excellent. Nicely said. Enjoyed. Tfs

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 6/3/2013 12:31:00 AM

Good Luck Sara, Nicely webbed/ love / manel

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/3/2013 12:27:00 AM

Wonderfully done! Good luck!

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 6/2/2013 6:37:00 PM

Poetically beautiful Sara. A tremendous take on this contest. I think you aced it. Thanks for the comment on 'Sea Glass'. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/2/2013 6:05:00 PM

We also get a variety of garden spider, I don't know which kind they are however! I fear the spiders most of all with our gardens...I am terrified of spiders! Being out in the country I get scared a lot it seems, more than I like to admit! Your poem will do quite well in the contest Sara! I loved reading this illustrious write this evening! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!