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Garden of Nature

* *A* *Garden* *Is a place* *For observing* *Nature at its best* * The butterflies and bees* *Sweet smelling scent of red roses* *Sounds of birds singing in the trees* *And winter, spring, summer and autumn* *Paints the garden canvas with new colours* II III III IIII IIII IIII IIIII @ @ @ @ @ @ @ @ @ @ @ @ @ @ @ \/ \/ \/ \/ \/ \/ \/ \/ \/ \/ \/ \/ \/ \/ \/
Written 9th June 2020 For Garden Poetry Contest Sponsored By Dear Heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 9/23/2020 6:24:00 AM
Wow Tom, I see what you mean, impacts visually before even reading and very creative. Yours is beautiful and brilliant, love the image and every word. Emilia : )
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/23/2020 6:45:00 AM
Thank you very much Amelia, im pleased you liked it. Took a bit of trial and error. Tom
Date: 6/19/2020 9:44:00 PM
Wow, beautifully written and beautifully presented. You can't beat the smell of a rose garden! Congrats Tom :-)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/20/2020 4:57:00 AM
Thank you Lisa, on a warm summers day you can't beat it. Tom
Date: 6/18/2020 5:18:00 PM
Tom, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful and creative poem, I love your shape _Constance
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/18/2020 5:56:00 PM
Thank you very much Constance, I'm happy you liked it, thank you too for hosting the contest. Tom
Date: 6/15/2020 3:19:00 PM
Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work Tom.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/15/2020 3:53:00 PM
Thank you very much Funom, I'm happy you enjoyed it Regards Tom
Date: 6/14/2020 4:55:00 AM
(((Congrats!!))) Tommy...excellent presentation my friend...^WW^ :o)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/14/2020 6:04:00 AM
Thank you W. W., glad you liked it. Hope you're well Tom
Date: 6/13/2020 7:09:00 PM
Pleasing to the eye. VERY pleasing with the words AND the shape. Congrats for your win, Tom.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/13/2020 9:20:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea, glad you liked it, its a form I enjoy using.. Tom
Date: 6/13/2020 6:42:00 PM
A walk in a garden is always soothing if we observe the beautiful nature as you mention Tom. The Etheree layout gives it such a beautiful look. Congratulations on your win. Keep writing and inspiring :)
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Date: 6/13/2020 9:18:00 PM
Thank you Aditi, I'm happy you enjoyed it, I do like the etheree form. Tom
Date: 6/13/2020 5:45:00 PM
Back...I found your winning status, Great.....kudus.. Panagiota
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Date: 6/13/2020 5:50:00 PM
Thank you again Panagiota, glad you liked it. Tom
Date: 6/13/2020 5:40:00 PM
I don't know how I missed this winner. Sorry, Tom. It's beautiful as are you, Pannagiota xxoo
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/13/2020 5:42:00 PM
Thanks Panagiota, it certainly tried my patience, it wouldnt let me make changes that I wanted to, found out there was a problem on soup. Tom
Date: 6/13/2020 5:35:00 PM
One of the finest Etheree's I have read Tom. I loved this! I hope it is a top winner! Blessings xxoo
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/13/2020 5:37:00 PM
Thank you Connie, I surprised myself, didn't think it would do so well. Tom
Date: 6/11/2020 9:28:00 PM
Great imagery, Tom, Constance will love it.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/13/2020 4:17:00 PM
Thank you very much Eve, it took a while to do it. Tom
Date: 6/11/2020 9:38:00 AM
Lovely friend. Bless you with a win. With love, Gina
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/11/2020 10:27:00 AM
Thank you Regina, I'm happy you liked it. Tom
Date: 6/10/2020 10:34:00 PM
well done, I couldn't begin to type this.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/11/2020 4:03:00 AM
Thank you Timothy, I'm glad you liked it. Tom
Date: 6/10/2020 7:26:00 AM
Having had a garden, I understand you completely my friend, Tom for whatever you say I have seen happening. A perfect poem and a perfect graphic. Blessings
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Date: 6/10/2020 8:17:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios, we're lucky we have one, I do love the flowers but my wife is the green fingered one. It is a little bit of heaven on a warm summers day. Tom
Date: 6/10/2020 6:11:00 AM
So beautiful! What a treat, Tom! I should add, I love trees!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/10/2020 8:15:00 AM
Thank you Kim, me too, we're lucky because there are lots of woods a short drive away from me, I do love to sit in the garden when the weather is pleasant. Hope you're well Tom
Date: 6/10/2020 3:28:00 AM
such a beautiful shape poem a joy to read - I've not even see the contest yet! see my comment to Eileen re edits:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/10/2020 3:39:00 AM
Thanks very much Jan, at least our gardens are getting a good soaking at the moment. Tom
Date: 6/10/2020 1:32:00 AM
G'day Tom … a tree can tell us so much about nature. They are really fauna cities, so the shape of your verse is appropriate - thanks Tom - Lindsay
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/10/2020 2:02:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay, had a few problems, wouldn't let me make changes for ages, on the fifth it let me do it. Tom
Date: 6/10/2020 12:29:00 AM
Wow.. Wonderful creativity.. Great write Tom..
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/10/2020 2:00:00 AM
Thank you Jenish, glad you liked it. Tom
Date: 6/9/2020 8:17:00 PM
Amazing, Tom. You are a man of many talents! A privilege to associate with you! Wonderful write/drawing! :) gw
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Date: 6/10/2020 1:59:00 AM
Thank you Gershon, likewise, I do have a humourous streak but can do serious as well ( reluctantly lol) Tom
Date: 6/9/2020 7:45:00 PM
Beautiful, Tom! I LOVE the creativity of your shape poem and lovely words to match. Best of luck in the contest! Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/10/2020 7:15:00 AM
I had the same problem when I was trying to edit a poem yesterday. It took me over an hour.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/10/2020 1:58:00 AM
Thank you very much Rhonda, had terrible trouble, I went in to make some changes and it wasn't until about the fifth attempt that it would let me do it. Tom
Date: 6/9/2020 4:39:00 PM
Apt for the theme, Tom--loved your creative design---and the sights and sounds of a pleasing garden scene.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/10/2020 2:07:00 AM
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/9/2020 4:51:00 PM
Thanks Vijay, love to just sit out when the weathers nice, Tom
Date: 6/9/2020 4:14:00 PM
Sweet poem. Love the layout. Brings the message home. :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2020 3:27:00 AM
Tom admin are aware of the issues with editing - the tell me it can take up to an hour for edits to go through so keep trying - I too have had issues and know of several others who have too - if it persists tell admin please:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/9/2020 4:26:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, having problems updating, cant make any changes , may have to re submit. Hope you're well. Tom
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