Gar From Mars

There once was a man named Gar,
Who came from the planet Mars.
He had fun in the sun,
As he toasted his buns.
And slurped his drink from a bar.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Keogh Jr. Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 2:33 PM
Gar is by far the star in our house. Thank you, dear and I love you, too. It's time for you to start composing some more Gars, my dear. I and the world arfe waiting! Love, Gerard
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 5:03 AM
Congratulations Susan, on your honorable mention in New Contest: Out of this World Limericks! Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire. Smiles, Dane Ann
Freeman Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 12:18 PM
Congratulations on your success in this competition Susan. Agape, Moses
Villarosa Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 2:16 AM
Congratulations! Susan, really have fun on this Limerick. (^_^) Noel.
Fraser Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 12:44 PM
Congratulations Susan on your fine win in Carolyn's wonderful contest >> James
Devonshire Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 10:56 AM
Enjoyed your limerick! Congrats on your success in the contest. There were many great limericks and judging was difficult! Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 4:19 PM
Sounds like a wild kind of person...Keep the creative flowing..Sara
Gorelick Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 12:38 PM
Good one Susan..I love these limericks..BG
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