Premiere Contest WinnerGamboge Romance

My silent serene soul softly craves your candles of crystalline calm. 
Your gallant greens of golden glow gently beam with bumbles, bashing blissful thoughts in a thundering whisper.

Our chemistry and connection is madly enchanted in ethereal crimson certainty of nectar's new dawn.

I want to own the oceans and you like I hold my butterflies and beliefs. 
Rumple my radiant lips on silhouette sheets of your secret shoulder yard, leaving amaranth art of kisses on your lavender chest. 

Letting your spikes of spices chase me into a search of serenity.
You are my wind in the wild storm.
The whisperer, wanderer in my mystical melodies.

You are the tempting thoughts in my tempestuous tides, thrilling the turbulent twilight of my heavenly heart.
The mesmerizing midnight memories in the infinite brain of my independent heart.

I'm nightfall without your luminous laughter.
I'm dateless without your conducive calendar of pink promises.
I'm the death of a wasteful war and torn tears from the endless screams.

Be the pondering puzzles of my relentless reasoning.
The savoury solitude in my sour soul.
The hibiscus honey and roasted peanuts in my poetic pantry.
My rustling reckless reflection in muttered excuses.

And I'll be your rainbow, your Rosa Juliet. 
Your chocolate cosmos. Your scout for love in the jungle of jasmine spring.

I have fondly found fleeting fragrances of happiness from the ryhming rheum in your eyes. It is daring densely, hallucinating hazardously, making me stare still till I blindly bleed in haphazard hues.

Till eternity my love, your secret silence is the riff in every song. It is the splash of every sound. The hair on my stirred skin. The pulchritudinous phases of pain in astrological agony.

Stand, stand my sublime king so thou shalt see the height of my love for thee.

Listen, listen my charming prince so you shall hear my painting in every voice.

So you can feel the breathless bath of the present and the tickle in the tapestry of our voiceless vows, viciously channeled through the thighs of our bond and the sync of your seductive grasp.

So I can smell the wind of your hands slowly stroking my sensitive skin and the attention of my hairs saluting your stemless grasps.
My soul critically craves you my workshop and I your tools.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 9:06 AM
Wow what a well deserved win for alliteration. Belated congrats
Jones Avatar
June 7, 2024 at 5:50 AM
Wow your poem is a masterpiece! I’ve not been as active on soup as I am learning to play piano. Belated congratulations on your win for this gem Tonye!
Beaufort Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 10:20 AM
Tonye, a great description of romantic feelings and adoration that inspires. Congratulations on the trophy!!
George Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 4:57 PM
Thank you Duke. I appreciate.
Anaya Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 1:09 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win! Wow nailed it with your "the jungle of jasmine spring" and all the alliteration is top notch, golden penning & so romantic Tonye! xhugs
Anaya Avatar
May 26, 2024 at 8:59 AM
:)
George Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 3:27 PM
Thank you so much, Anaya. I appreciate.
One Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 9:50 AM
Congratulation on your trophy win! You deserved it... So happy you got your poem in on time..
One Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 10:21 AM
Oh really? Not sure how I did that, but thank you..
George Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 9:59 AM
Thank you so much Silent. You actually motivated me to try to get back. I appreciate it so much.
Empress Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 7:54 AM
sweet tonye. This poem is one of d best iv read for the contest, n i knew you will get first . You and silent one nailed this romantic alliterative contest. And yours resonate for me. Congratulations on your placement! Well deserved
George Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 9:07 AM
Thank you, dearest Ink.
One Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 12:30 PM
What an amazing arrangement of alliterations and romance.. I hope you didnt miss out on the alliteration contest? poem explores the intense connection between you and your beloved, describing it as "madly enchanted in ethereal crimson certainty." The imagery of owning the oceans and holding onto butterflies and beliefs emphasizes the depth and intensity of their feelings.
George Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 5:50 PM
I guess I made a late entry. If not the last. Thank you so much for your support always. I love the idea of love and romance, hahaha.
Empress Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 11:15 PM
My dear sweet tonye! Ive missed uou! And how lovely to see you back and posting! A poem with alliterations and brilliant metaphors! Not something i see everyday on soup! So this makes me feel warm reading something that connects with me as your metaphors are deep and soulful! Especially love “You are the tempting thoughts in my tempestuous tides, thrilling the turbulent twilight of my heavenly heart.” I can resonate with that! Especially tempestuous tides! My tides can be quite that haha! And turbulent twilight hah!! You speak for me! You write romance so well dear tonye! Is this for tomsz contest? Looks like he loves it already! Sending you light
George Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 6:13 AM
Thank you, dearest Ink. I've missed you loads too. Yes it is, thank you for your support. I know your tides are like that.
George Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:40 PM
Wow....Your alliterations flow relentlessly and spontaneously! "Be the pondering puzzles of my relentless reasoning. The savory solitude in my sour soul. The hibiscus honey and roasted peanuts in my poetic pantry. My rustling reckless reflection in muttered excuses". Your poem is animated with deep passion and romance and it has a natural flow. Enjoyed much, dear Tonye.
George Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 6:12 AM
Thank you dear Valsa. Thank for you for support.
Poet Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 7:20 PM
I am impressed by your ability to craft such delightful and engaging alliterative phrases. I love alliteration and it's quite rare that I write a poem without it, and it seems effortless for you as well. Well done!
George Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 6:19 AM
Thank you, dear Sotto.
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