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Gamboge Romance Premiere Contest Winner

My silent serene soul softly craves your candles of crystalline calm. Your gallant greens of golden glow gently beam with bumbles, bashing blissful thoughts in a thundering whisper. Our chemistry and connection is madly enchanted in ethereal crimson certainty of nectar's new dawn. I want to own the oceans and you like I hold my butterflies and beliefs. Rumple my radiant lips on silhouette sheets of your secret shoulder yard, leaving amaranth art of kisses on your lavender chest. Letting your spikes of spices chase me into a search of serenity. You are my wind in the wild storm. The whisperer, wanderer in my mystical melodies. You are the tempting thoughts in my tempestuous tides, thrilling the turbulent twilight of my heavenly heart. The mesmerizing midnight memories in the infinite brain of my independent heart. I'm nightfall without your luminous laughter. I'm dateless without your conducive calendar of pink promises. I'm the death of a wasteful war and torn tears from the endless screams. Be the pondering puzzles of my relentless reasoning. The savoury solitude in my sour soul. The hibiscus honey and roasted peanuts in my poetic pantry. My rustling reckless reflection in muttered excuses. And I'll be your rainbow, your Rosa Juliet. Your chocolate cosmos. Your scout for love in the jungle of jasmine spring. I have fondly found fleeting fragrances of happiness from the ryhming rheum in your eyes. It is daring densely, hallucinating hazardously, making me stare still till I blindly bleed in haphazard hues. Till eternity my love, your secret silence is the riff in every song. It is the splash of every sound. The hair on my stirred skin. The pulchritudinous phases of pain in astrological agony. Stand, stand my sublime king so thou shalt see the height of my love for thee. Listen, listen my charming prince so you shall hear my painting in every voice. So you can feel the breathless bath of the present and the tickle in the tapestry of our voiceless vows, viciously channeled through the thighs of our bond and the sync of your seductive grasp. So I can smell the wind of your hands slowly stroking my sensitive skin and the attention of my hairs saluting your stemless grasps. My soul critically craves you my workshop and I your tools.

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Date: 6/7/2024 5:50:00 AM
Wow your poem is a masterpiece! I’ve not been as active on soup as I am learning to play piano. Belated congratulations on your win for this gem Tonye!
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Date: 5/28/2024 10:20:00 AM
Tonye, a great description of romantic feelings and adoration that inspires. Congratulations on the trophy!!
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Tonye George
Date: 5/28/2024 4:57:00 PM
Thank you Duke. I appreciate.
Date: 5/25/2024 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win! Wow nailed it with your "the jungle of jasmine spring" and all the alliteration is top notch, golden penning & so romantic Tonye! xhugs
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/26/2024 8:59:00 AM
:)
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Tonye George
Date: 5/25/2024 3:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anaya. I appreciate.
Date: 5/25/2024 9:50:00 AM
Congratulation on your trophy win! You deserved it... So happy you got your poem in on time..
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Silent One
Date: 5/25/2024 10:21:00 AM
Oh really? Not sure how I did that, but thank you..
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Tonye George
Date: 5/25/2024 9:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Silent. You actually motivated me to try to get back. I appreciate it so much.
Date: 5/25/2024 7:54:00 AM
sweet tonye. This poem is one of d best iv read for the contest, n i knew you will get first . You and silent one nailed this romantic alliterative contest. And yours resonate for me. Congratulations on your placement! Well deserved
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Tonye George
Date: 5/25/2024 9:07:00 AM
Thank you, dearest Ink.
Date: 5/25/2024 6:04:00 AM
What can I say Tonye? Your poetry continues to amaze and enthrall. You are a top-notch poetess, and we're so glad you're here. What man could resist such words as "I'll be your rainbow, your Rosa Juliet. Your chocolate cosmos. Your scout for love in the jungle jasmine of spring?" Superb. Congrats!
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Tonye George
Date: 5/25/2024 7:06:00 AM
Ohh! I'm so elated and honoured. Thank you so much Tom for embracing this piece. Thank you.
Date: 5/24/2024 12:30:00 PM
What an amazing arrangement of alliterations and romance.. I hope you didnt miss out on the alliteration contest? poem explores the intense connection between you and your beloved, describing it as "madly enchanted in ethereal crimson certainty." The imagery of owning the oceans and holding onto butterflies and beliefs emphasizes the depth and intensity of their feelings.
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Tonye George
Date: 5/24/2024 5:50:00 PM
I guess I made a late entry. If not the last. Thank you so much for your support always. I love the idea of love and romance, hahaha.
Date: 5/23/2024 11:15:00 PM
My dear sweet tonye! Ive missed uou! And how lovely to see you back and posting! A poem with alliterations and brilliant metaphors! Not something i see everyday on soup! So this makes me feel warm reading something that connects with me as your metaphors are deep and soulful! Especially love “You are the tempting thoughts in my tempestuous tides, thrilling the turbulent twilight of my heavenly heart.” I can resonate with that! Especially tempestuous tides! My tides can be quite that haha! And turbulent twilight hah!! You speak for me! You write romance so well dear tonye! Is this for tomsz contest? Looks like he loves it already! Sending you light
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Tonye George
Date: 5/24/2024 6:13:00 AM
Thank you, dearest Ink. I've missed you loads too. Yes it is, thank you for your support. I know your tides are like that.
Date: 5/23/2024 10:40:00 PM
Wow....Your alliterations flow relentlessly and spontaneously! "Be the pondering puzzles of my relentless reasoning. The savory solitude in my sour soul. The hibiscus honey and roasted peanuts in my poetic pantry. My rustling reckless reflection in muttered excuses". Your poem is animated with deep passion and romance and it has a natural flow. Enjoyed much, dear Tonye.
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Tonye George
Date: 5/24/2024 6:12:00 AM
Thank you dear Valsa. Thank for you for support.
Date: 5/23/2024 7:20:00 PM
I am impressed by your ability to craft such delightful and engaging alliterative phrases. I love alliteration and it's quite rare that I write a poem without it, and it seems effortless for you as well. Well done!
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Tonye George
Date: 5/24/2024 6:19:00 AM
Thank you, dear Sotto.
Date: 5/23/2024 7:14:00 PM
You had me at rainbows, chocolate and jasmine. What a beautiful tribute to love, and awesome alliteration as well
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Tonye George
Date: 5/24/2024 6:20:00 AM
Thank you Tom.
Date: 5/22/2024 5:47:00 PM
wonderful and captivating alliterative lines. I admire that you are able to do so. I struggle with alliteration, but you made it look easy! Nicely done I especially liked "tickle in the tapestry of our voiceless vows." have a splendid evening, hugs, Sara
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Tonye George
Date: 5/23/2024 5:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sarah. How are you faring? I've been away for so long I'll check in on you soon.

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