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'galaxy'

two hearts in orbit endeavor to become one our own galaxy

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James Foulk

Date: 4/1/2011 10:53:00 AM

i love your style and your poetry, and this one is right up there, a very good read. thank you Wilma for reading my the pond and for your commet.

Kash Poet

Date: 3/30/2011 11:32:00 PM

wonderful!how I missed this little gem from you:)-kash

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2011 10:17:00 PM

I really like this one. what a fine senryu!

Jeff Eklund

Date: 3/28/2011 10:59:00 AM

Very nice, Wilma.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/28/2011 6:42:00 AM

A lovely thought here,Wilma : ) Jack

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2011 5:20:00 AM

Feel the luv in these lines Wilma my friend.. when in luv.. in orbit for sure.. good luck if for the contest .. great idea to have our own galaxy for individuals.. expressive and impressive luv..

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/27/2011 4:23:00 PM

This is really sweet, Wilma..Love the image of two hearts in orbit, oblivious to anything else! Love it! Hope your weekend was great, dear friend! Love, Annalise

James Fraser

Date: 3/27/2011 3:47:00 PM

Out of this world is too much a cliche. Into this world is the place to live. Nice one my Sassy Poetess....:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2011 1:21:00 PM

Great one...If for the contest, a sure winner..It is truly great for there to be a great love between two people...Thanks for the kind review of my work..I am doing well..Feeling stronger..I hope to be back full swing in about four weeks..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/27/2011 1:04:00 PM

When you find someone who moves you this much, it truly is out of this world. Lead the way to the new galaxy, Wilma. I'll be right behind you searching for a special guy, even if he's green and has three toes. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/27/2011 12:50:00 PM

Very pleasant write, Wilma

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/27/2011 12:36:00 PM

Just my mind thinking...always thinking... lol Can't tell you everything Darling...then theres no mystery

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/27/2011 12:02:00 PM

Great thoughts for people that are so far apart.. mmmm makes me wonder.. I like the thoughts in this delightful write... love Michael