Gain and Pain

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" WANDERING SOUL " MY PHOTO,

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The one who intentionally hurts his fellow man for he yearns something to gain Must know that his soul into eternity puts through much suffering and pain! © Demetrios Trifiatis 30 April 2021

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Judy Ball

Date: 4/30/2021 8:03:00 PM

It is written: "Cast your bread upon the waters and you will find that after many days it will return unto you." Well said my friend. God Bless, JB

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/30/2021 2:23:00 PM

Hi Demetrios, Where should a person intend to advance in existence, spiritually or physically, if he damages others? An excellent creativity combined with an expanded lexicon, a wonderful poem. Blessings and regards

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/30/2021 10:37:00 AM

How true your words are Demetrios - how can you expect to progress in life, soul and body by doing harm to others - wonderfully creative and wonderful imagination, great poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/30/2021 1:10:00 PM

Thank you so much for your appreciation dearest, Jennifer. God bless you for your kindness. Hugs xxx

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/30/2021 8:10:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, Whatever a person puts out, whether good or bad, it shall come back to them. As always, great job. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/30/2021 1:08:00 PM

True, my dearest Alexis, however, it is evil deeds that hurt our soul. The good ones God knows. Thank you for your gracious visit and comment. Hugs xxx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/30/2021 6:04:00 AM

They will reap what they sow Demetrios, everyone will one day account for any misdeeds they have committed. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/30/2021 6:12:00 AM

That is a great truth, my friend, Tom. The evildoers do not believe it for it is not in their interest but justice is waiting for them. Thank you so much for your gracious visit and comment. Blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/30/2021 5:17:00 AM

And that is what such a soul deserves---well said my friend. Light shines on your words, as always.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/30/2021 6:25:00 AM

Absolutely, they do, my friend Vijay. Justice always prevails! Thank you for your gracious comment. God bless you.