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Future's Promise of Hope Stirs In Us All

Future's Promise Of Hope Stirs In Us All Within epic sea of man's greatest quest, amidst usual pains laid on each head- Cometh dark trials of the severest test, deep mourning crying for love ones now dead. Future's promise of hope stirs in us all with stronger courage to race in life's train. Precious, sweetest memories we recall, brilliantly stored within each clever brain. Should we obey an eternal request heed its solemn and very wise advice. Trusting truth that good is always the best, holding faith in our God will then suffice. What of gravest doubts at the journey's end? Pains of deceased family or best friend? Robert J. Lindley, 1-31-2016 Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: Total # Words: 100 Note: Sonnet writing is my new therapy . As I find it occupies my mind, brings joy and may even serve to help others! At least, thats my wish.. This one addresses doubts even in the midst of an acknowledged strong faith... In this write, I challenged myself to write this hitting my "perfect 100 words" per sonnet goal. Succeeded in my first draft.

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Date: 2/1/2016 11:42:00 PM
A beautiful sonnet, Robert. It is inspiring to see you immerse yourself this way. May you continue to be blessed with this therapy as we are the better for it. All the best!
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Date: 2/1/2016 6:27:00 AM
Terrific Sonnet, Robert, and by it's power at your own hand may you find healing. Regards, Viv
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Date: 1/31/2016 7:02:00 PM
wow, you have found a really good therapy for yourself by challenging your brain with that 100 word thing. Keep it up , my friend. Keep being your very best. I love to see you feeling happy for your accomplishments. hold on to that faith so strong in you too!
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Date: 1/31/2016 4:00:00 PM
Excellent sonnet, Robert. Faith in god will always suffice. Congrats on the 100 word challenge.. and don't EVER doubt yourself.
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Date: 1/31/2016 3:38:00 PM
Well written sonnet. I hope it is helpful to others. I pray skies get brighter for you. Love ,Joyce
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Date: 1/31/2016 3:32:00 PM
Robert, perfect poem... couplets are me favorite forms of poetry.. a 7 from me dear Robert.-luloo
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Date: 1/31/2016 3:16:00 PM
A 7, and definitely a favourite! Exquisitely written with a smooth cadence and fine rhyming... a true sonnet my friend. I think we would all do well to heed your concluding words... Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/31/2016 3:13:00 PM
Brilliantly penned Robert - we all face challenges in life and uphill battles ... keep the faith alive and keep setting yourself these challenges - your words inspire us all:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/31/2016 3:11:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your sonnet today..Aiming for the perfect sonnet..Great goal..Sara
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Date: 1/31/2016 3:01:00 PM
- With a loving family ...... you can handle everything - A great sonnet poem, Robert - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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