James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Future Dreams

Just imagine
In a millennium from now
The dreams we have
That our minds plough
 
As us humans evolve
Into what is unknown
Will our future dreams 
Be able to be shown
 
Just think 
Before we awake
Our dreams are saved 
For us to remake
 
We sit down
Before a white wall
Open our eyes
As our dreams befall
 
To have the power
To control our dreams
Wake the next day
Our personal live stream
 
I think our mind
Is in its infancy
If we hang around
Maybe we'll see?

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Kristin Reynolds May 11, 2009 at 2:58 AM I agree. we are but babies. when we hit 5D, it will all be instantanious. think it=happen. instant. I plan on being there. :) Great poem forward. love, Kristin

Barbara Gorelick May 10, 2009 at 5:33 PM I have a poem caalled Lucid Dreaming..this reminds me of that. Oh, to control our minds..maybe we'll see? Love, BG

Carolyn Devonshire May 10, 2009 at 12:43 PM Again you touch on a subject that I find so intriguing, James! Since doctors say we only use a small portion of our brains now, we may very well "have the power To control our dreams" at some point in time. Truly, "our mind Is in its infancy." Like many of your other poems, this goes into my favorites! Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno May 10, 2009 at 11:32 AM I think you're right, I loved the first and last stanza, great work...Raul

Kat Crane May 10, 2009 at 11:31 AM An uplifting piece. I love the idea of the mind ploughing, sowing dreams of the future. Kat x