Fushia

fushia rain lilies sleepy blossoms droop.. bent from last's storm

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/4/2014 6:25:00 AM

Excellent haiku Sara. Love it, really wonderful!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/3/2014 5:28:00 PM

absolutely delightful haiku:-) Hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/3/2014 1:07:00 PM

A lovely haiku that paints its own picture!

David Meade

Date: 11/3/2014 9:12:00 AM

I love the interplay of weather and plants -- can't have one without the other . . . and they do leave traces upon and in each other . . . adding beauty. Loved the poem.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/3/2014 8:56:00 AM

beautifully painted picture sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/3/2014 8:51:00 AM

- What a shame - beautiful haiku Sara - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/3/2014 8:32:00 AM

lovely description of them. do you mean droop? I love that color fushia! I am getting it underlined when I write it though. Maybe it is spelled it differently!! Or the computer just does not know the word.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/3/2014 7:49:00 AM

Poor lilies Sara the desperately need the rain but it sure make the blooms droop and discolor:) love and hugs eve