Fury of the Wind (Limerick)

The face of the ocean seemed to smile
All was calm and quiet for a while
‘Till Wind’s temper was lost
With waves forcefully tossed
In her wrathful cantankerous style



*For Carolyn Devonshire's Sea Tale Limericks contest
Note:
This is the only Limerick I have ever written...so it was a bit of
a challenge.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 1:09 AM
I think I have seen all your stuff posted here, connie. but I happened back on this one that I was so suprised had been your very first limerick. Thanks for all your comments today. I appreciate you. LUv, Andrea
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 9:35 PM
This was my first and last limerick Andrea. I can't believe how many views this one little limerick has gotten. In my opinion, it is not that good compared to others. Maybe it is because it is the only one??? I am terrible at writing them which is why this is my lone one. You shine atwriting them Andrea! Cheers, Connie
K. Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 2:06 AM
Not bad for your first limerick, you even won--super yay! Enjoyed reading this Connie :)
Kendrick Avatar
March 7, 2010 at 4:20 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest with this great write. Sorry that I didn't see it earlier...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Palli Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 11:38 PM
Well done! Loved it.
Owens Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 2:23 PM
Nice Limerick..Congratulations on your win...Marty
Omaidin Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 12:17 PM
If this is your first, you are heading for stardom REgards: Déirdre Ó Maidin
Pickett Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 9:32 AM
Congrats on your win... Best of luck in future endeavors.....:JP}
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Connie. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 9:05 PM
Dear Connie, my warm congratulations on your win the contest! And thank you for reading and leaving encouraging comments on my poems. Peace, love, Audrey
Strand Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 8:08 AM
Congrats Connie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments.
Culverhouse Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 5:44 AM
congrats on the win!!
Fraser Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 3:50 AM
Kool Limerick Connie, i am delighted for you being placed in Carolyn's fine contest >> James
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March 1, 2010 at 12:26 AM
It’s a fish eat fish world out there! Congratulations Connie, you swam to the top of the pond with your winning placement in Carolyn Devonshire’s Sea Tale Limerick contest. I'm impressed by this excellent first try! (Imagine bubbles floating around the following words!) Bask in the fun of the winner’s circle. You deserve it. Big Smiles! Lovingly, Dane Ann
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 11:52 PM
Hey, Connie, I see that you placed with this. IS this honestly your first one? YOu did excellent meter for it, connie, something that not everyone can manage with limericks. Luv ya,Andrea
Moreno Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 11:21 PM
Nice limerick and congrats on your placement...Raul
Keogh Jr. Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 9:18 PM
Then you had more than beginners' luck, my dear. Good entry and it should only get better. You did it! Now keep on and up. Regards, Gerard.
Scripca Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 8:25 PM
Wow! Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Sea you!!! Love, Iolanda
Freeman Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 7:27 PM
Congratulations on your place Connie. Agape, Moses
Guzzi Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 6:53 PM
naww your a winner!!! Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 6:52 PM
Congrats Connie on your winning poem in the Limerick contest.. a terrific tale and a wonderful win for u to enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie
Devonshire Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 6:22 PM
Knowing of the threat your island state faced, I like the way you kept your sense of humor this weekend! Congratulations on your success in my contest. Love, Carolyn
Dufresne Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 1:19 PM
And a fine limerick it is Connie! Good luck to you.
Palli Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 5:59 AM
so clever
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