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When I went back home for longer vacation Surprised to see our backyard turning out to be a mini-zoo My younger brother had adopted lots of pets Winged, furry, reptiles… I couldn’t name the rest I was spurred to tour around , it was so fun I saw seven cows, five goats, grazing in our farm Geese, ducks, turkeys and various breeds of chicken My mother was there, happily feeding them There was even a big brown snake in an iron cage I trembled, I didn’t even glance or gaze I liked the yellow and black birds, Kiaos and Martines They were learning to talk, one partly warbled, Fur Elise Among his pets, furry ones got my full attention Dino, the monkey was tending cows with our four dogs Holding cow’s ropes, they came to me in wagging tails Then afar, I saw Panny Bat, our bird’s fruit supplier Dino, Doggies Pandak, Poom, Pashang and Pampu Were amazing caretaker- pets in our farm’s mini-zoo Farm heroes, we named them including Panny Who went out at night then returned to her cage the next day I’ve tamed and befriended with these farm heroes I rewarded Dino some lollipops, our four dogs with foods Panny Bat, 'though untouchable was so cute Her face absolutely resembled with our four dogs When I’ve heard the loss of the three farm heroes last year Died of ailments were Doggy Pandak, Poom and Dino Gear And after a month, Panny Bat suddenly disappeared Members of our family, including myself grieved March 6, 2016 10.20pm -This poem was also written for my younger brother who, until now have these pets at home. His small fishpond was not included in the poem. The Kiaos and Martins (look like mynahs) were 5-7 I think. My mom taught them to sing Fur Elise, Do A Deer etc… Fourth Place Contest: Furry Friend Judged: 5/6/2016 Sponsor: Poet Royal

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Date: 6/27/2016 9:18:00 PM
Galeo, nice to see your furry friend win. Love SKAT
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Len Gasun
Date: 7/6/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thank you my dearest Skat for your visit on my poem. God bless! Hugs!
Date: 5/7/2016 11:29:00 AM
Congrats Galeo, for your top placement with this captivating and awesome piece!! ;-)
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Date: 5/12/2016 11:39:00 AM
thank you so much my dear friend, Teddy! Hugs!
Date: 5/7/2016 5:32:00 AM
Hi Leonora:) I enjoyed your lovely collection of animals; it's a pity that we have to lose some of our pets after we get so attached to them. I hope you are keeping well. ~ Congrats on this deserved win. hugs ~ paul
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Date: 5/7/2016 9:30:00 AM
Hugs to you as well my dear friend, Paul. Thank you so much for enjoying my family collection and your congratulatory comments. Yeah, so sad to lose those lovely and smart pets. Again, thank you so much. God bless!
Date: 5/6/2016 9:04:00 PM
this poem was a lot to take in, I did love the sentiment it has for you, Galeo =(^.^)= RoyalT
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Date: 5/7/2016 9:27:00 AM
Thank you so much my dearest Royal for appreciating and acknowledging my poem in your contest. Thank you so much for the inspiration. God bless!
Date: 3/18/2016 9:08:00 AM
How lovely!! This is so fantastic, dear Leonara!!
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Date: 3/23/2016 10:24:00 AM
Thank you so much dear friend, Sneha. Hugs!
Date: 3/8/2016 2:58:00 PM
Hello my BFF, I hope you are well, now I'm enjoying this poem. Lol, your poem made me smile also made me sad. I have 2 dogs a shitzu and a poodle, 3 cats .. a Tom Cat name CHULO a Persian Cat name Ashes.... and my favorite Cat is a Calico... She's missing now :( She got lost during the move. I keep going back to the neighborhood in hopes she comes out from hiding. No luck so far... I'm not giving up right now.
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Len Gasun
Date: 3/12/2016 6:05:00 PM
About the snake, I told my brother already that it's dangerous, he said no. But ewwe.. Yes, furry pets are friendly by nature. Sending back my love and hugs!
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Len Gasun
Date: 3/12/2016 6:01:00 PM
Hello my dearest sis-BFF! I am home now, arrived Thurs. night then back to school Fri and Sat. Now, I'm preparing again for 3-days Eng. Camp in the same place but different venue. So far, but I've to go coz I need to substitute a facilitator who went back home coz her brother passed away. Thanks for enjoying my story poem. I'm so sorry to hear that Calico is missing, I'll pray that you'll find her soon. I'm sure she's looking for you a well. Hope you'll find her sis.
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Date: 3/8/2016 3:00:00 PM
Hi..me again. Sis.. I like that your brother enjoys pets...lol..but, id do without the snakes .. ewwe... furry pets are easy to attach to... Enjoyed the wonderful and awesome poem. Sending hugs and love...Linda
Date: 3/8/2016 2:48:00 PM
Hi, Sis...I'm sorry I missed your phone calls...I've been busy unpacking my things... hope to hear from you again... Have a happy trip.. I' will text the information later today... love ya...Linda
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Date: 3/12/2016 6:08:00 PM
It's ok my dearest sis! Hugs! Thanks you so much....
Date: 3/8/2016 8:05:00 AM
wow What a menagerie. Where is this farm. It sounds fascinating. I agree that bats faces are very doggy looking tee hee SuZ
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Date: 3/12/2016 6:11:00 PM
I guess:)) It's near my home sweet home...Yes, at first I didn't like the bat, but when I looked closely and saw her face, it was not scary, look exactly my dog and she comes in and out freely from her cage to gather fruits from out mango or guava tree. Sometimes she joined the other bats at night, I thought.
Date: 3/7/2016 12:10:00 PM
- A bit of a wildlife ..... much fun and a lot of work :) - A poem to enjoy, dear Leonora :) - Really great written - Best wishes for a beautiful new week :) - hugs and <3 // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2016 12:32:00 PM
Yes, a bit of wildlife my dear friend, Anne Lise! My younger brother like them all. I like them too except the snake because when I was a child, I'd traumatic experience. I was almost bitten by snake but my dad grabbed me so fast, then I was so shocked. Best wishes to you as well dear friend. Hugs!
Date: 3/6/2016 10:54:00 PM
Excellent. Well penned. I do love animals. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Len Gasun
Date: 3/7/2016 10:48:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend, Ravi! Hugs!
Date: 3/6/2016 10:44:00 AM
I do love animals. They do teach us so many life lessons. Wonderful Leonora.
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Len Gasun
Date: 3/7/2016 10:47:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend, Tim! Hugs!

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