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Furry Friends, Our Farm Heroes

When I went back home for longer vacation Surprised to see our backyard turning out to be a mini-zoo My younger brother had adopted lots of pets Winged, furry, reptiles… I couldn’t name the rest I was spurred to tour around , it was so fun I saw seven cows, five goats, grazing in our farm Geese, ducks, turkeys and various breeds of chicken My mother was there, happily feeding them There was even a big brown snake in an iron cage I trembled, I didn’t even glance or gaze I liked the yellow and black birds, Kiaos and Martines They were learning to talk, one partly warbled, Fur Elise Among his pets, furry ones got my full attention Dino, the monkey was tending cows with our four dogs Holding cow’s ropes, they came to me in wagging tails Then afar, I saw Panny Bat, our bird’s fruit supplier Dino, Doggies Pandak, Poom, Pashang and Pampu Were amazing caretaker- pets in our farm’s mini-zoo Farm heroes, we named them including Panny Who went out at night then returned to her cage the next day I’ve tamed and befriended with these farm heroes I rewarded Dino some lollipops, our four dogs with foods Panny Bat, 'though untouchable was so cute Her face absolutely resembled with our four dogs When I’ve heard the loss of the three farm heroes last year Died of ailments were Doggy Pandak, Poom and Dino Gear And after a month, Panny Bat suddenly disappeared Members of our family, including myself grieved March 6, 2016 10.20pm -This poem was also written for my younger brother who, until now have these pets at home. His small fishpond was not included in the poem. The Kiaos and Martins (look like mynahs) were 5-7 I think. My mom taught them to sing Fur Elise, Do A Deer etc… Fourth Place Contest: Furry Friend Judged: 5/6/2016 Sponsor: Poet Royal
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A  Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Galeo, nice to see your furry friend win. Love SKAT
Gasun Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 10:01 AM
Thank you my dearest Skat for your visit on my poem. God bless! Hugs!
Kimathi Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 11:29 AM
Congrats Galeo, for your top placement with this captivating and awesome piece!! ;-)
Gasun Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:39 AM
thank you so much my dear friend, Teddy! Hugs!
Callus Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 5:32 AM
Hi Leonora:) I enjoyed your lovely collection of animals; it's a pity that we have to lose some of our pets after we get so attached to them. I hope you are keeping well. ~ Congrats on this deserved win. hugs ~ paul
Gasun Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 9:30 AM
Hugs to you as well my dear friend, Paul. Thank you so much for enjoying my family collection and your congratulatory comments. Yeah, so sad to lose those lovely and smart pets. Again, thank you so much. God bless!
Ninja Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 9:04 PM
this poem was a lot to take in, I did love the sentiment it has for you, Galeo =(^.^)= RoyalT
Gasun Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 9:27 AM
Thank you so much my dearest Royal for appreciating and acknowledging my poem in your contest. Thank you so much for the inspiration. God bless!
Rv Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 9:08 AM
How lovely!! This is so fantastic, dear Leonara!!
Gasun Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 10:24 AM
Thank you so much dear friend, Sneha. Hugs!
A   Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 2:58 PM
Hello my BFF, I hope you are well, now I'm enjoying this poem. Lol, your poem made me smile also made me sad. I have 2 dogs a shitzu and a poodle, 3 cats .. a Tom Cat name CHULO a Persian Cat name Ashes.... and my favorite Cat is a Calico... She's missing now :( She got lost during the move. I keep going back to the neighborhood in hopes she comes out from hiding. No luck so far... I'm not giving up right now.
Gasun Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 6:05 PM
About the snake, I told my brother already that it's dangerous, he said no. But ewwe.. Yes, furry pets are friendly by nature. Sending back my love and hugs!
Gasun Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 6:01 PM
Hello my dearest sis-BFF! I am home now, arrived Thurs. night then back to school Fri and Sat. Now, I'm preparing again for 3-days Eng. Camp in the same place but different venue. So far, but I've to go coz I need to substitute a facilitator who went back home coz her brother passed away. Thanks for enjoying my story poem. I'm so sorry to hear that Calico is missing, I'll pray that you'll find her soon. I'm sure she's looking for you a well. Hope you'll find her sis.
A   Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 3:00 PM
Hi..me again. Sis.. I like that your brother enjoys pets...lol..but, id do without the snakes .. ewwe... furry pets are easy to attach to... Enjoyed the wonderful and awesome poem. Sending hugs and love...Linda
A   Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 2:48 PM
Hi, Sis...I'm sorry I missed your phone calls...I've been busy unpacking my things... hope to hear from you again... Have a happy trip.. I' will text the information later today... love ya...Linda
Gasun Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 6:08 PM
It's ok my dearest sis! Hugs! Thanks you so much....
Delaney Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 8:05 AM
wow What a menagerie. Where is this farm. It sounds fascinating. I agree that bats faces are very doggy looking tee hee SuZ
Gasun Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 6:11 PM
I guess:)) It's near my home sweet home...Yes, at first I didn't like the bat, but when I looked closely and saw her face, it was not scary, look exactly my dog and she comes in and out freely from her cage to gather fruits from out mango or guava tree. Sometimes she joined the other bats at night, I thought.
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March 7, 2016 at 12:10 PM
- A bit of a wildlife ..... much fun and a lot of work :) - A poem to enjoy, dear Leonora :) - Really great written - Best wishes for a beautiful new week :) - hugs and <3 // Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 12:32 PM
Yes, a bit of wildlife my dear friend, Anne Lise! My younger brother like them all. I like them too except the snake because when I was a child, I'd traumatic experience. I was almost bitten by snake but my dad grabbed me so fast, then I was so shocked. Best wishes to you as well dear friend. Hugs!
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March 6, 2016 at 10:54 PM
Excellent. Well penned. I do love animals. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Gasun Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend, Ravi! Hugs!
Smith Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 10:44 AM
I do love animals. They do teach us so many life lessons. Wonderful Leonora.
Gasun Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 10:47 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend, Tim! Hugs!
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