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Fun today let's get some gruB Under the tree we sat just you and I Now we can be a paiR This day was a great evenT I will go walk on the beacH My gift was in my carD Enjoyment was abound in the areA See today it is my birthdaY Date Written: 5/27/2020 3 Place Double Double Words To Bubble Contest Judged:6/2/2020 Sponsored by:Joseph May

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Date: 6/4/2020 5:07:00 AM
Dear Paula, I love the way your words always bring a smile on my face. Congratulations on your win :) Keep writing. God bless you.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/4/2020 1:50:00 PM
Thanks for your note and congratulations. I love to make people smile. Keep smiling. Enjoy your day with blessings........
Date: 6/3/2020 8:48:00 AM
Wonderful write Paula, Congrats on your win
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/4/2020 1:36:00 PM
Thank You, for reading, writing and your congrats on my win. Have a wonderful day......................
Date: 6/3/2020 12:12:00 AM
Paula, lovely birthday celebrations. Congrats. Mohan
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/4/2020 1:20:00 PM
Thank You, for reading and writing. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Date: 5/30/2020 3:58:00 PM
A double acrostic is never easy to do, Paula, but I see that you handled this with confidence. ~ Regards // paul
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/30/2020 5:47:00 PM
Thanks for your note. You are so right, a double acrostic is never easy to do. This was my first. I want to grow as a poet. I like to try new things. Thanks for your kind words. Have a wonderful day.........
Date: 5/29/2020 12:57:00 PM
- Hope you had a great day ... lovely written, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2020 1:15:00 PM
Thanks for your note. So glad you like it. Have a wonderful weekend with hugs........

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