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Funny Story Except It Is True

I am standing around the house I hear a loud boom with floor vibrations I ask if everyone is ok because I thought someone fell flat on their settee Everyone says we're ok what was that?? After much investigation We found that my tire had exploded into shreds I am considering suing the company Never used spare tire, only fourteen years old Should not have exploded like that!!

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/9/2011 5:01:00 PM

more scary if u were driving and it exploded Doris... it happened to us once on the highway and we got four new ones instead of just one.. but eventually sold them off.. u are right..should NOT have exploded..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2011 8:14:00 PM

Isn't fourteen years old a long time though? Oh, well, what do i know about tires. I have had two blowouts on the freeway in my life. Be grateful you were not on the road!

Don Johnson

Date: 7/8/2011 3:04:00 PM

ehhehe funny lady, check under all the rocks, 2 see if they are wearing socks. xo, Don

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/8/2011 1:51:00 PM

Glad you weren't near it. I enjoyed the verse, not the disaster.

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/8/2011 1:50:00 PM

balloons explode and so do tires. consider your self lucky.

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/8/2011 11:52:00 AM

Wow! An explosive tale! At least you got an interesting write out of it! Have a great weekend-- Robert.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/8/2011 10:00:00 AM

Good one.. Was that what I heard all the way down here that should like a cannon going off? Mom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/9/2011 12:35:00 PM

That sounded like a cannon..Mom

James Fraser

Date: 7/8/2011 6:40:00 AM

An exploding tyre can be very dangerous Doris. I dare say it has perished over the years. Many thanks for your kind words. < I am fine, how are you and yours? > Have a lovely weekend :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/8/2011 6:24:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Doris. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol