Fun Times

Jake's Hot I'm Not I Swam With Pam Was Cool In Pool Ate Ice Felt Nice Hot Day We Lay Fun Times Soft Chimes Sun Slept I wept Alexis Y. 7-22-19

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/27/2019 10:17:00 AM

such a fun little poem!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/25/2019 12:40:00 PM

I like you wove each footle's vignette into a short story. Very nicely done, Alexis! ~ gw

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/23/2019 1:45:00 PM

A write that I felt like , and in fact did sing to myself - catchy, vibey, attractive and bold and creative imagination Footle poetry, sounds fun, might try it, don't know if I could do as well as this one though - well penned Alexis. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/23/2019 11:44:00 AM

Dancing with verses so fine Makes me feel I drank wine! Hugs dearest Alexis xxx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/23/2019 5:01:00 AM

A lot of imagery in 28 words. Tom

Jan Allison

Date: 7/22/2019 7:09:00 PM

aww great imagery in so few words Alexis i love the fun footle form:-) hugs Jan xx