Fun On a Summer Day

Spewell Bluff a lovely place
Fishing, swimming, slower pace
River's bend with a mile view
A fun place for me and you
Georgia State Parks you come too

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/5/2009 9:19:00 PM
Sara, wanted to send you a soup mail but couldn't. Since I've already commented on this poem just wanted to say congratulations!! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 10/31/2009 10:52:00 PM
Congratulations to Georgia State Parks and to you for your win. Joyce
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Date: 10/31/2009 8:02:00 PM
Dear Sara, Congratulations on YOUR well deserved placement in Brian's Contest YOU have given me an Idea for a POEM Thank-YOU for YOUR gracious Comments YOURS ALWAYS ...HG YOU should read Daffy Definition Again as I have had several responses LOVE...HG
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Date: 10/31/2009 10:15:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Great poem. Pam.
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Date: 10/31/2009 9:45:00 AM
Hi, Sara! Congratulations on your deserved win in Brain Strand's Poet Laureate contest. I love the rhythm and rhyme in your witty Imagism. I wish you many more wins! Enjoy this honor. Best Wishes, Andrew.
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Date: 10/29/2009 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/28/2009 3:27:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your placement in the contest with your winning poem.. well written and well deserved... my son is thinking of moving to Georgia so I might come along for the ride.. enjoy your moment .. bravo.. Linda-Marie .. its an honor to be on the same podium with you...
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Date: 10/28/2009 2:25:00 PM
Congratulations, Sara, on your placement in Brian's contest with this wonderful Quintain about the great state of Georgia! SMILES, Dane Ann
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Date: 10/28/2009 11:35:00 AM
Great pitch here! You've got me interested in visiting! Congrats on your success in the contest! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 10/28/2009 10:55:00 AM
It sounds like a wonderful place to be. I'll be there, we'll have a picnic!! :) Congratulations on this winning entry!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/28/2009 10:10:00 AM
Lovely tribute to a beautiful place, Sara. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/28/2009 8:56:00 AM
Congrats on you success in my contest Sara.Rgds Brian My latest contest ADAPTION is now open .
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Date: 10/22/2009 12:00:00 AM
Thank you for your supporting my contest Sara.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/20/2009 9:41:00 AM
Impressive! I had to look up Imagism. Excellent job, Sara! Great imagery! Would love to spend some time there in the summer. Peace and love, Audrey
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