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Fun In the Street

On the street a block away The children come out to play In hydrant water courtesy Of the town’s fire department. Their screeches of joy Rivaled only by the chirping Of birds diving for a splash, In what has become a gigantic Birdbath made for comfort From the sweltering heat Of an overheated mid-July. I long to join the joyous melee, But folks would think it weird This eighty-year-old, in trunks, Laughing and cavorting merrily With the children who know me, Who would think nothing of it!
Written July 26, 2022

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Date: 7/30/2022 9:19:00 AM
The children would be delighted if you joined them!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/30/2022 10:55:00 AM
Truthfully, they probably would. They'd get a kick out of splashing this old man!
Date: 7/28/2022 4:21:00 AM
Milt, you stir such memories with this one! What a fun, nostalgic write and yep, the kids would be fine with it! Happy Thursday !!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/28/2022 7:59:00 AM
You, too, Mike. As I said below, I think I'll pass, although I'm sure the neighborhood kids would get a kick out this old man joining them. They are good kids!
Date: 7/27/2022 6:08:00 PM
Oh, I'd do it Milt - I'd join in the fun! Life is so short, gotta take it where you find it! Thanks for the fun trip. Linda
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/27/2022 6:42:00 PM
Oh, Linda, I'm afraid someone would haul me off to the funny farm! Thanks, though.
Date: 7/26/2022 7:36:00 PM
What fun your verse is to read, Milt, The urge to join in was strong with me too. The children would have thought that a hoot and enjoyed the company whatever age. Still smiling.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/27/2022 5:25:00 AM
That's probably true, Shirley, but I'm afraid I'd feel like a total fool. There are some things that I just pass on these days.
Date: 7/26/2022 6:38:00 PM
That's right. It wouldn't bother the kids at all... And I doubt it would bother many Milt. Go for it!! :) gw
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/26/2022 7:07:00 PM
Nah, gw, think I'll pass.
Date: 7/26/2022 4:07:00 PM
We are kids at heart Milton. I see the fun and excitement of children opening the fire hydrant and playing in the water, cooling themselves on a hot day. You watch their excitement and you want to join in the fun. I read your response on the Train ride with your love and I understand if you feel too emotional not to write. Thank you for considering Milton and again I understand how you feel...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/26/2022 7:20:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kind understanding, Michael. Much about that trip I treasure, to be sure.
Date: 7/26/2022 3:54:00 PM
How much fun~get out there and join them, why not? Also, Amazon informed me that your review is up. :)Paulette
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/26/2022 7:26:00 PM
Paulette, it's a warm, positive, and lovely review. I cannot thank you enough. I think the other fellow who left a review thought he was buying a book of fiction, not a book of short stories and personal experiences. I'm so happy you enjoyed the book.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/26/2022 7:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paulette. I shall go there, for I am very anxious to read it.
Date: 7/26/2022 2:20:00 PM
it would be fun, why not? happiness doesn't know how old we are.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/26/2022 7:21:00 PM
That is so true, Marco, but, unfortunately the neighbors do, and most of them would label me an old fool. But, on the other hand, who cares? Right?

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