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Fun and Games

it’s the day after
and there’s whooping & hollering
the oculus is operational
kid’s head buried
in witless game
oblivious of who, what, where
there’s an attachment to his inner mind
no one else can see

i see poetry
in a tree, a frothing cup,
in a knight-shining chessboard -
black and white

i see i see
i long the sea
even if i trip
into the oculus
with pirouetting waves,
captive to a pirate ship,

i shall not wear
the scent of salt-air,
feel the brisk slap of the windy-cold,
be tossed to and fro,
be entertained

it’s the day after
there’s whooping & hollering
mindful i aim
for fun & games
ones that i can put my hands to

12/26/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 4:27 AM
I love this "i see poetry in a tree, a frothing cup, in a knight-shining chessboard - black and white"
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 11:35 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Radice Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 1:51 PM
I guess we poets too have our own virtual worlds that we can get lost in. A great write Kim and congratulations with your win in Brian's contest. Cheers - Gary
Rodrigues Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 7:15 PM
Thank you, Gary!
Brown Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 1:07 PM
Poets see beauty in everything.... Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 1:41 PM
For sure!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 12:49 PM
The young have their fun, we grown ups have our poetry. Lovely write, Kim. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 1:42 PM
This is true…very true! :)
Poet Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 12:17 PM
Marvelously crafted verse with plenty of creative imagination, Kim. You adequately captured a fantastic scene about the youngster's activity.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 1:43 PM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Baker Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 10:59 AM
Imagination running wild in your poetry the day after, Kim. Enjoy this time and the last week of 2021. Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 1:43 PM
Thank you! You too, Bill!
Leffanta Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 10:49 AM
I am all for letting the young live in their world (I still consider the Outback an adventure), but well caught, Kim! Aloha!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 1:44 PM
Aloha! Thank you, Rico!
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