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Beneath the Moss and Vines

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the wind is w i l d- birds are chirping, my long raven hair is SWIRLING all about; I walk slowly to your tombs w e e p i n g, this path has been my journey a "thousand" times; and I STAND above the lovely bones of my dear beloved, I touch each e n g r a v e d name beneath the moss and vines; and I want to fall to my knees and with my hands D I G up all the lovely bones. . . ____________________________ June 10, 2016 Poetry/Rhyme/beneath the moss and vines Copyright Protected, ID 16-799-301-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Titles of Novels sponsor, nette onclaud Third Place

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Date: 6/14/2016 4:23:00 PM
So pleased that my forecast was correct, Constance! Congratulations on a very merited win. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/14/2016 2:51:00 PM
one of the more interesting of all the invented forms with no rhyme mixed in! Big congrats for your win. I really enjoyed this one, Constance
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Date: 6/14/2016 8:45:00 AM
How well you have written up the bones,Constance!Congratulations!
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Date: 6/14/2016 3:28:00 AM
such a complex form so beautifully rendered, constance... thanks for being part of my contest and fine congrats on your win!..huggs
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Date: 6/11/2016 7:22:00 AM
I knew it! I knew it! I told myself that you would be choosing this title, and so it is! You have performed excellently well, Constance. Looking forward to see this high on the winners' list. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/11/2016 7:11:00 AM
Great deep write:) all the best, Constance:)
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Date: 6/10/2016 11:01:00 PM
BW, this one could be the story line for a rather dark movie.
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Date: 6/10/2016 6:48:00 PM
This is remarkable write one of your very best writes. Good luck in the contest
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