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Full Moon

Her face is wrinkled, cratered, and scarred; It’s far from flawless; agèd; hard. But when the night is right, she’ll overflow, For about her is an indelible glow; A glorious white that lights the sky As I kiss her surface with my distant eye, And stretch out my fingers for a feel But she steps an inch back, arousing appeal; I wish the nights would bleed over days So I could bathe in her luminous ivory rays. Cursed be the sun, for when comes the dawn With an opalescent yellow yawn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/2/2012 10:24:00 AM
Woonderful..love the last line especially...BG
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Date: 6/2/2012 8:39:00 AM
Another absolutely gorgeous piece of writing!
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Date: 2/21/2012 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Brian's~ "Your Choice Once More" contest *Eric*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 6:55:00 PM
Eric, wonderful couplets. It is poems like this that keep me coming back. Very good job, my friend. Congrats for making Brian's winners' list........S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/20/2012 2:09:00 PM
Thank you all for the congratulations. This is the best online poetry community I have ever belonged to.
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Date: 2/20/2012 12:46:00 PM
Enjoyed the creative feel of this one..Like the personification of the moon..It has winner written all over it..Congrats on your win in Brian's contest...Sara
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Date: 2/20/2012 9:25:00 AM
congrats Eric on a dynamite first place win luv.. superb poetry..
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Date: 2/20/2012 12:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Eric. This entry has great descriptiveness and rhyming.
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Date: 2/19/2012 8:13:00 PM
ERIC.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with ANOTHER wonderfuL win... ~ always*PD
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Date: 2/19/2012 6:30:00 PM
what a unique poem about the goddess moon, Eric. A very special poem and well deserved win. congrats. Much enjoyed.
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Date: 2/19/2012 4:15:00 PM
A fascinating piece. Congratulations Eric. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/19/2012 3:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely write, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/19/2012 2:55:00 PM
Welcom in to PSoup Eric, lovely poem written - welcom to reading some of mine. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/19/2012 2:00:00 PM
Eric... can it be the beauty if a curse,,,~always p.d.
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Eric Specian
Date: 2/19/2012 3:05:00 PM
I'm not quite sure what you exactly mean, but if you're asking can beauty be a curse, then I would say yes.

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