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Fulfilling Life - Collaboration With White Wolf

An empty shell, abandoned am I left alone? left to sigh? I once housed a caterpillar an ambitious butterfly Now I miss my old cocoon and still cannot fly Come pick me up soar the skies create turbulence with you Leaving behind our worn-out lives morphing into something new *** September 19, 2017 Copyright © White Wolf and Darren White
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Daniel Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 7:47 AM
Lovely collaboration, Darren and WW:) wishful and sad, a tone I like :)
White Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 7:03 AM
Thanks Jo, we loved writing this.
Smith Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:34 AM
Wonderful work, congratulations on your beautiful collaboration...
White Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 7:03 AM
Thanks so much Charlie :)
Williams Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 4:28 AM
Another excellent collaboration Darren and WW. I love the way you two blend...Maria
White Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:27 AM
Thanks Maria :)
Wolf Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 4:26 AM
I so wish to colour that butterfly in!!! LOL.
White Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:26 AM
LOL silly, go get your crayons and start colouring ;)
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 7:44 PM
I love seeing what you two create together!! I need to go visit him and see if he has this one posted up at his own wall. VERY nice, Darren.
White Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:27 AM
Thank you Andrea :)
Cresswell Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 2:46 PM
A good piece of work.
White Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:27 AM
Thanks Patricia :)
Lane Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:49 AM
Becoming something or someone new is not an easy task, but then most worthwhile things in life are not handed to us. An honest and inspirational write from you two, Whites.
White Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:29 AM
No, it isn't easy at all. But it all starts with an internal 'attitude' that you very consciously address.
Matt Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 7:54 AM
A 7 for you two. goodluck!!~phatt
White Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Thank you phatt :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 7:39 AM
Short, deep, perfect. Wonderful pen. Metamorphosis for two. xomo x2
White Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:30 AM
Merci ma mo :)
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