Fulfilled

Hear my fervent promise
made wholeheartedly as Aphrodite's passion,
Adonis.

my love is pure
wholly fulfilled without ration
assure

allow
love's chaste fashion
vow

Hear my fervent promise
wholly fulfilled without ration
vow
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Famuyiwa Avatar
October 25, 2024 at 12:04 PM
Congratulations.
Fowler Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 7:35 AM
Thank you Maclawrence. :)
Evans Avatar
October 25, 2024 at 11:15 AM
Congratulations, Linda. Yes, to the power of love.
Fowler Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 7:35 AM
Yes! Totally agree. Thank you Marilene! :)
George Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 11:12 PM
Lovely Minichu on Fulfilment. Love given without ration. Congratulations dear Linda on your placement.
Fowler Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 7:34 AM
Many thanks dear Valsa! :)
mysore Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 3:00 AM
congratulations on your 'minichu' contest win dear poet. cheers.
Fowler Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 7:33 AM
Hello Thriveni. Thank you for your congrats. Cheers and hugs! :)
Leach Avatar
October 5, 2024 at 4:11 PM
What a beautiful and romantic poem. Love is fulfilling.
Fowler Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 8:38 AM
Thank you so much Alesia! Nice to meet you. :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 5:06 PM
S sweet Minichu here!
Fowler Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 5:30 PM
Many thanks Andrea. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2024 at 9:05 AM
allow love's chaste fashion vow…love the alliteration in your poem. Very nice, Linda!
Fowler Avatar
October 2, 2024 at 10:28 AM
Many thanks Kim. :)
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October 1, 2024 at 12:27 AM
Oh my, what a majestic poem you've crafted dear Linda... I absolutely adore how you've woven these Greek mythological hints so beautifully whilst giving a magical definition to the fulfillment of love. I believe, this is for the 'minichu' contest!? If so, you've truly nailed the flow and depth here.. It's actually a wonderful write with so many vivid emotions painted in an elegant way. "love's chaste fashion", " vow" And those interactive lines with "hear... " simply stunning ~
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 6:20 AM
Oh my goodness - there you are! I've missed you Hiya. Your kind and supportive words are gratefully accepted. I rather liked this one myself. So good to see you! :)
Greenhough Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 6:58 PM
This very romantic poem is simple, yet classical. It sings a vow of eternity.
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 6:17 AM
Many thanks dear Hilda. So glad you enjoyed it. :)
Romios Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 4:31 PM
Oh, good, first to comment! Linda, this is truly beautiful, A FAVE! You give Shakespeare a run for the money. I think if the Bard were here, he would hug you. This should be a POTD. There is no overwriting here nor underwriting… there is purpose, beauty, and love. Adding the Greek reference was superb. I am so honored. I have a friend like you. Thank you for being in my life Linda. Love, Pangie xx
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 6:17 AM
Hi sweet friend. Wow - I'm honored not only for your friendship but also for the fav! You are truly one-in-a-gazillion. love and hugs, Linda :)
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