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Frustrations

Aching with such soreness, the thought of touching glass longing to shatter in pieces but uncertain as to how much force. Strength of varying degrees to apply and yet fearful of shattered glass, brittle grains of sand and levels of the unknown. Grey dark clouds heavy laden with drops. Looking to burst but just waters in motion, waiting, titillating in jest almost laughing down. Provoking a longing to reach up, to burst that bubble to feel the coolness and freshness of relief. Yet so far above, cannot reach miles of the unknown. A grain of sand between bones grinding when dryness has set in. So very painful like gallstones excreted thru the wrong passage no relief even death unquestioned, a vital option to touch the unknown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/26/2014 5:25:00 PM
Nice write, a brilliant way to explain frustration, it like darkness, it end a weak soul to an unknown, lol, enjoyed reading Richard
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Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 7/27/2014 3:46:00 AM
Dear Richard, thanks so much for visiting and for the uplifting comments, Lots of alofas, Tiaua.
Date: 3/25/2014 10:29:00 AM
Awesome imagery of frustrations displayed here!!
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Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 3/25/2014 11:45:00 AM
So glad to make your acquaintance dear Pace and thank you so much for the lovely comments, Alofas, Tiaua.
Date: 3/3/2014 8:10:00 AM
I can feel the frustration with this poem. Great one! Thanks for reading my poetry.
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Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 3/5/2014 7:11:00 AM
Your comments dear ML is very much appreciated. All the best in our forthcoming work which I will surely visit. "Alofa's from Samoa. Tiaua.
Date: 2/14/2014 11:45:00 PM
Tiaua, . Happy valentines, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 2/15/2014 4:06:00 AM
Thanks Poet Destroyer for the welcome, yes I am new and still trying to find my way around. Just to let you know that your poems made me join. I aim to enjoy, thanks again.

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