Fruity Voice

FRUITY      VOICE


Her voice reminds me of laughter barely suppressed
An energetic spirit tugging constantly at  the rope
A caterpillar turning to butterfly at any moment
Her  voice sounds like lifegiving fruit

Not serious, self-important fruit like geometrically precise pineapples
Or pompous, overfed watermelons
Too heavy to lift

Not business fruit like apples, on duty keeping doctors away
Or bananas waiting to do their slippery work under feet
Or blackberries, whose careers lie in jam

But mischievous fruit like grapes or cherries
Which roll away like playful children when you’re not looking
Or fallen raisins on the carpet pretending to be part of the pattern

Fun-loving fruit like mandarin oranges around the Christmas tree
Basking under the Christmas lights, enjoying the glitter
Of tinsel and the smell of pine needles

Small fruits which enjoy life,
Laughing as they jostle each other in their bag,
And which could easily become   bubbly wine  if tempted.

Her ripened voice -   
The spontaneous fruit of a lifetime 
Of growth and maturing, and regeneration :
Aliment  for  my  soul’s  ailment.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2011 at 9:56 PM
what a most interesting poem and I just love grapes and cherries. Congrats on this wonderful poem making it thru round one!
Brown Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 6:14 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The very best to you in the finals Sydney. Love Carol
Maverick Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 11:01 AM
a livley write Sydney, good to see your success.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 6:52 PM
Congrats Syd on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv...
Guzzi Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 5:43 PM
LOOK my flegling has flown through cut 1 on an international poetry site GO Syd, TANYA HUG HIM!!!! Congrad's Light & Love
Brown Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 10:58 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Sydney in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "For The Sake Of Free Verse". Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:29 AM
Good to see you at the top Sydney. Congratulations on your inspiring Free verse and it honored 2nt place. Agape, Moses
George   Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 5:29 PM
Dear Sydney, congratulations on your BIG WIN in the Free Verse contest. I enjoyed it very much. Lainie
Mehta Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 4:23 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Chris, Sydney
Onclaud Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 9:18 AM
wow, a gentle explosion for the senses with an energy that vibrates in each line, syd! please note that chris gave extra concessions to men so more males will join this free verse joust.. read his blogs... thumbs up for the win! so flaterred you asked me if i can lend my poem to you.... :) huggs, nette
Neels Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 8:41 AM
Sydney, I enjoyed this loads tonight.. Congratulations on your win in Chris's contest ;-) WN
Sweetheart Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 6:49 AM
Congrats Syd on your big win in the free verse contest.. enjoy another chart topper luv..
Helbaoui Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 5:42 AM
A very exotic poem I find it but beautiful... Congratulations on this well deserved win. Love it, Sami
Mannan Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 2:57 AM
A beautifuldedication to this beautiful ripened voice. many congrats for this win.
Pettit Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 1:11 AM
A beaut about fruit. Congratulations on winning with this entry.
Guzzi Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 1:02 AM
OK no more tutoring for you young man beating out your teach LOL YOU GO Syd! so proud FOR you! wonderful write and great win Chris has "taste" Light & Love
Inka Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 12:36 AM
Very enjoyable read. Well done, and congrats
K. Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 10:21 PM
Super congrats, Sydney-- this sure is a very fun poem and love the metaphor you used here--I found it so unique, got me smiling all throughout-- enjoyed each description that you did-- wonderful message you give here too!
Brown Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 4:33 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Sydney. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 5:03 PM
Congrats Sydney on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful one to share with us all today with luv..
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Sydney. Love, Carol
Eggins Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 5:22 AM
She sounds delightful we should all know someone like this ... wonderful poem packed with imagery congratulations on it being featured this week love Jayne
Sweetheart Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 9:23 PM
Congrats Sidney on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all with luv..
Guzzi Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 5:37 AM
If you had used "heals my soul" in the last line it would have worked for the contest but as it is the tie to the topic of healing is too weak, but, as I said it is a most excellent write regardless of the contest! Light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 5:36 AM
Absolutely love this write a real #7 but you have not tied it back to the topic of the contest how did FRUIT or her fruity laugh help you get well...IF you could do that it would be a contest winner. Light & Love and thanks for the lovely read.
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