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Fruitful Wheels

Watermelon wheels circle round and round, thump, thump, thumping, on bumpy ground. The pits sparkle, as they spin and whirl, and juicy pink flesh, flashes and twirls; the treads of its rind, striped green, a watermelon bike, a fruitful machine. Date: July 9, 2022 For: A watermelon Fantasy Ride to Feed My Imagination Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/17/2022 5:40:00 PM

Nice rhythm and rhyme, Paulette. I like your chances in the contest my friend. Hugs, Bill

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 7/18/2022 4:35:00 AM

Hi Bill~glad you enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme, I thought it was quite catchy but didn't even place in the contest. Oh well...LOL. I'll just keep rolling on.... :)Paulette

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/13/2022 7:10:00 AM

Very nice. I like the Title. UNIQUE seems to me. Fruitful the most appropriate term. Love.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 7/13/2022 1:10:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it. I thought the contest was unique~a fun write. Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/11/2022 9:03:00 AM

Wonderful way to see the watermelon come to pieces. Pity we can't eat them.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 7/13/2022 1:11:00 PM

Hi Victor, I guess we can't take a bite but in our memory of the sweet taste we can relish it. Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/11/2022 8:05:00 AM

So catches the imagery and theme! Hugs ~ Kim

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 7/11/2022 8:47:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by to comment, Kim. A fun write. :)Paulette

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/10/2022 10:56:00 PM

Lovely Paulette! Best wishes

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 7/11/2022 5:14:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by to comment. This was a fun write. :)Paulette

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/10/2022 12:53:00 AM

Oh I bet Vie will love this entry Paulette. Adults and children alike can relate to this piece filled with bright imagery. I loved it! Blessings xxoo

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 7/11/2022 5:14:00 AM

Hi Connie, glad you "loved" it.....it was fun~a little levity now and then lifts the spirit. Blessings, Paulette