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Fruitful Wheels

Watermelon wheels circle round and round,
                    thump, thump, thumping, on bumpy ground.
                        The pits sparkle, as they spin and whirl,
                         and juicy pink flesh, flashes and twirls;
                           the treads of its rind, striped green,
                          a watermelon bike, a fruitful machine.



Date: July 9, 2022
For: A watermelon Fantasy Ride to Feed My Imagination Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose

Copyright © Paulette Calasibetta | Year Posted 2022

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Bill Baker Date: 7/17/2022 5:40:00 PM Nice rhythm and rhyme, Paulette. I like your chances in the contest my friend. Hugs, Bill Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 7/18/2022 4:35:00 AM Hi Bill~glad you enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme, I thought it was quite catchy but didn't even place in the contest. Oh well...LOL. I'll just keep rolling on.... :)Paulette

Anisha Dutta Date: 7/13/2022 7:10:00 AM Very nice. I like the Title. UNIQUE seems to me. Fruitful the most appropriate term. Love. Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 7/13/2022 1:10:00 PM Glad you enjoyed it. I thought the contest was unique~a fun write. Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/11/2022 9:03:00 AM Wonderful way to see the watermelon come to pieces. Pity we can't eat them. Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 7/13/2022 1:11:00 PM Hi Victor, I guess we can't take a bite but in our memory of the sweet taste we can relish it. Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/11/2022 8:05:00 AM So catches the imagery and theme! Hugs ~ Kim Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 7/11/2022 8:47:00 AM Thanks for stopping by to comment, Kim. A fun write. :)Paulette

I Am Anaya Date: 7/10/2022 10:56:00 PM Lovely Paulette! Best wishes Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 7/11/2022 5:14:00 AM Thanks for stopping by to comment. This was a fun write. :)Paulette

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/10/2022 12:53:00 AM Oh I bet Vie will love this entry Paulette. Adults and children alike can relate to this piece filled with bright imagery. I loved it! Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 7/11/2022 5:14:00 AM Hi Connie, glad you "loved" it.....it was fun~a little levity now and then lifts the spirit. Blessings, Paulette

Sotto Poet Date: 7/9/2022 2:50:00 PM Paulette, your poem is adorable and clever, and it's full of vivid imagery. Best wishes for the contest. Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 7/11/2022 5:15:00 AM Laasad, this was a fun write~thanks for stopping to comment and glad you found it "clever". :)Paulette

Michelle Faulkner Date: 7/9/2022 11:46:00 AM Sounds yummy! Good luck for the contest- Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 7/9/2022 1:31:00 PM thanks....a fun write. :)Paulette

L Milton Hankins Date: 7/9/2022 10:25:00 AM Cute and clever, Paulette. Very nice. Best wishes in the contest. Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 7/11/2022 5:13:00 AM Thanks Milton~a fun write. :)Paulette