Paulette Calasibetta Poet Rhyme

Fruitful Wheels

Watermelon wheels circle round and round,
                    thump, thump, thumping, on bumpy ground.
                        The pits sparkle, as they spin and whirl,
                         and juicy pink flesh, flashes and twirls;
                           the treads of its rind, striped green,
                          a watermelon bike, a fruitful machine.



Date: July 9, 2022
For: A watermelon Fantasy Ride to Feed My Imagination Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose

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Bill Baker July 17, 2022 at 5:40 PM Nice rhythm and rhyme, Paulette. I like your chances in the contest my friend. Hugs, Bill Paulette Calasibetta July 18, 2022 at 4:35 AM Hi Bill~glad you enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme, I thought it was quite catchy but didn't even place in the contest. Oh well...LOL. I'll just keep rolling on.... :)Paulette

Anisha Dutta July 13, 2022 at 7:10 AM Very nice. I like the Title. UNIQUE seems to me. Fruitful the most appropriate term. Love. Paulette Calasibetta July 13, 2022 at 1:10 PM Glad you enjoyed it. I thought the contest was unique~a fun write. Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette

Victor Buhagiar July 11, 2022 at 9:03 AM Wonderful way to see the watermelon come to pieces. Pity we can't eat them. Paulette Calasibetta July 13, 2022 at 1:11 PM Hi Victor, I guess we can't take a bite but in our memory of the sweet taste we can relish it. Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette

Kim Rodrigues July 11, 2022 at 8:05 AM So catches the imagery and theme! Hugs ~ Kim Paulette Calasibetta July 11, 2022 at 8:47 AM Thanks for stopping by to comment, Kim. A fun write. :)Paulette

I Am Anaya July 10, 2022 at 10:56 PM Lovely Paulette! Best wishes Paulette Calasibetta July 11, 2022 at 5:14 AM Thanks for stopping by to comment. This was a fun write. :)Paulette

Connie Marcum Wong July 10, 2022 at 12:53 AM Oh I bet Vie will love this entry Paulette. Adults and children alike can relate to this piece filled with bright imagery. I loved it! Blessings xxoo Paulette Calasibetta July 11, 2022 at 5:14 AM Hi Connie, glad you "loved" it.....it was fun~a little levity now and then lifts the spirit. Blessings, Paulette

Sotto Poet July 9, 2022 at 2:50 PM Paulette, your poem is adorable and clever, and it's full of vivid imagery. Best wishes for the contest. Paulette Calasibetta July 11, 2022 at 5:15 AM Laasad, this was a fun write~thanks for stopping to comment and glad you found it "clever". :)Paulette

Michelle Faulkner July 9, 2022 at 11:46 AM Sounds yummy! Good luck for the contest- Paulette Calasibetta July 9, 2022 at 1:31 PM thanks....a fun write. :)Paulette

L Milton Hankins July 9, 2022 at 10:25 AM Cute and clever, Paulette. Very nice. Best wishes in the contest. Paulette Calasibetta July 11, 2022 at 5:13 AM Thanks Milton~a fun write. :)Paulette