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Frozen In Crystalline - Number 2

Frozen in Crystalline – Number 2 Cold light, held above the vacant bench, iced tribute to love’s passioned warmth. 11/21/2014 submitted to Frozen in Crystalline – Poetry Contest sponsor – Andrea Dietrich

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/30/2014 3:43:00 PM

A beautiful picture, John, and I love the touch of romance! Congrats to you on an awesome win! Hugs, Rhonda

John Lawless
Date: 12/3/2014 10:44:00 PM

Thanks Rhonda for stopping by to read my entry.

Skat A

Date: 11/30/2014 1:54:00 AM

JOHN, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~

John Lawless
Date: 11/30/2014 8:58:00 AM

Thanks again for your support.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/30/2014 12:51:00 AM

a fine gem of a piece ,john..cheers to you for your great win

John Lawless
Date: 11/30/2014 8:59:00 AM

Thank you Nette for your continued support.

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/29/2014 6:21:00 PM

Hi John, such great imagery created with your words that mirror the feeling in the picture. Congratulations on your win! Sandra

John Lawless
Date: 11/30/2014 9:02:00 AM

Sandra, there is a bench similar to that in a nearby park that I visit with my dog on many cold and eerie nights.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/29/2014 1:16:00 PM

hi John congrats on win hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 11/29/2014 12:21:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats John-) Hugs Jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 11/30/2014 9:01:00 AM

Thank you Jan for following my writing and for you support.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2014 7:58:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work..There are some very interesting and descriptive works in the winner's list..A fine group of poets gather at this soup pot..Sara

John Lawless
Date: 11/30/2014 9:01:00 AM

you got that right Sara, dip the soup ladle into the soup and you get an overflowing mix of delicious poetry.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2014 12:53:00 AM

I sure do love the poems about that park bench. Iced tribute indeed. that picture sure did look cold, didn't it? good one, John. congratulations in my contest.

John Lawless
Date: 11/30/2014 8:57:00 AM

Thanks Andrea for you comment and you dedication to the poetry contests

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 11/22/2014 5:35:00 AM

Like a toast blessing the warmth of winter. Well-done, John.

John Lawless
Date: 11/30/2014 9:03:00 AM

Thanks for reading and commenting