Frozen In Crystalline

A fierce winter wind blows up a storm Angry snowflakes begin to swarm

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2014 3:59:00 PM

Oh, ok, I forgot you won with the other one. I went to see it again, and you made the right choice. this is nice but it would not have scored as high with me as your other one did!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2014 10:29:00 PM

I don't remember this one in my contest. Was it? Nice job.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/23/2014 10:10:00 PM

Oh, I love the force of imagery in your second stanza Joseph! An exceptional piece!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/23/2014 7:15:00 AM

- Beautifully this too, Joseph - but my favorite is number 6! - Happy Sunday - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/22/2014 8:55:00 PM

great descrition Joseph - if its written for Andrea's contest you need to amend the title:-) hugs Jan xxx