Frozen Ice

Cold Frozen Blue iris It’s your ice blue Eyes Russell Sivey

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/6/2012 5:44:00 AM

Hi there, Russell..hope skool is goin' smoothly for ya..today is the BIG DAY FOR US OHIANS!! Hope you are at the polls with me in spirit!.. You have chosen one of my fav spring flowers for this lanterne write...gorgeous image portrayed of a lover's eyes..Ice blue took the reader on a u-turn which is very clever! Glad you liked Neptune and his blending of traits in my verse entry. I rewrote it 3 times. Not an easy contest at all..All the best for you and your family this day! Gwendolen

Don Johnson

Date: 3/5/2012 4:28:00 PM

piercing eyes that freeze a soul, never can i be now whole, for eternity...

Jack Horne

Date: 3/5/2012 2:37:00 PM

I can just picture those cold blue eyes - powerful piece