Frozen Gifts

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On this road I travel with tall pines cloaked in white, Underneath blue sky in mild air, I capture this memorable sight Stunned by miles of beauty, grateful that I can see For in this vision I have, this moment, no other place to be In my mind, I ride the bright clouds across the sky While I travel the ground below with scenes going by Like a slideshow of beauty on this road I’ve chosen With all these precious gifts, winter has frozen Heidi Sands 1/7/23

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Joseph May

Date: 1/8/2023 6:53:00 AM

Wonderful write Heidi, I love the end line, hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/8/2023 6:54:00 AM

Thank you for the kind feedback Joseph . Hugs :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/8/2023 6:03:00 AM

I see the tall pines in white. Amazing how nature is beautiful in every season. Wonderful, scenic poem.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/8/2023 6:53:00 AM

Hi Vijay. Thank you. I couldn't see the photo earlier. I do now, even though they get blurry when I post my own photos here. I appreciate your comment :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/8/2023 4:25:00 AM

Pristine beauty delivered as such, Heidi:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/8/2023 6:03:00 AM

Thank you Jo. I appreciate your kind comments :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/7/2023 8:25:00 PM

Austere, yet inviting somehow... Your poem - totally delighting. Thanks, gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/8/2023 6:02:00 AM

Thank you so much Gershon. I appreciate your comments:)