Frozen Feather of Memory

In the cleavage of the reclined verdant bough,
ornate with the fine filigree of emerald foliage,
a lattice braided with the love-laced reeds
with finesse of desire motif of nest I weaved.

On the wings of winter afloat on northern wind
wilted leaves of belonging wafted away rustling,
my frosted nest clung to the skeleton of tree,
I counted in heartbeat footsteps of twilight hour.

Flair of yearning turning into glacial embrace,
you escaped, flew away to the sun blazed sky. 
In the frosted debris pining in the arctic nest
I live in memory with the frozen feather you left.

The winter blizzard in my world without you
broke the folded wings of my frigid heart.
I can’t fly in the wake of your evanescing flight,
but wait, for I know in spring you will return.

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November 22, 2019
A Brian Strand 1096 Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 6/1/2020 4:01:00 PM
Love the stunning imagery and your portrayal of emotions. Congratulations on your win Subimal.
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Date: 2/21/2020 3:58:00 PM
Subimal, Congratulations on your imagery studded poem. Love the line"broke the folded wings of my frigid heart." Really nice.
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Date: 12/22/2019 3:23:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Subimal
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Date: 12/22/2019 3:00:00 PM
Congrats on your top win I see why it placed so high!;)
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Date: 12/22/2019 2:07:00 PM
Congrats Subimal on a mesmerizing write truly one of the best I've seen, this is a special write!
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Date: 11/30/2019 7:54:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Subimal
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Date: 12/18/2019 12:26:00 AM
Sorry, this poem didn't place in the contest. Thanks for visiting.
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