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your breath upon the window freezes, lace yet, warm against my cheek, its somber strains as dampened words collect in tears to trace the spoor of sorrow weeping from my veins your perfect bows then tremble with a smile soft-press your pitied kiss upon my eyes three words, a whispered falsehood to defile the beggar's hope I’d held of sweet goodbyes one last embrace to mock the frigid air your warm skin buried deep inside your coat the final knife, "goodbye", you bring to bear and drag the jagged word across my throat your chilling crime of passion now complete my love, like blood, lays puddled at your feet.

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Date: 7/21/2021 5:09:00 AM
Beautiful Creations. Congratulations!
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