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frozen dead buzzard lies a week beside road.... unappetizing

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2018 9:00:00 PM

It's sad but kind of funny to me how you did the last line Sara!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/18/2018 7:01:00 AM

Andrea, The buzzard still lies beside the road it seems to be still whole uneaten but I haven't gotten out of the vehicle and looked closely. It seems even the ants haven't touched it. My husband says that it is too cold for the ants that they are eating stored food and not getting out of their unground safety zone..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/19/2017 10:03:00 AM

Most definitely unless it was the last thing left on earth to eat...All the best for the season Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/21/2017 4:16:00 PM

Arturo, It would be hard to eat it even if it was the only thing left to eat..Thanks for the reality comment..Your presence at my work is encouraging..Sara

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 12/19/2017 8:29:00 AM

Giggle, love this!!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/21/2017 4:15:00 PM

Maureen, Thanks for the encouraging comment..I am glad that you got a giggle..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 12/19/2017 8:19:00 AM

aww poor thing:-( great haiku sara:-) hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/21/2017 4:14:00 PM

Jan, Thanks for stopping by..What a way to end the year...Sad that this member of the flock is no longer with his family..There was a dead deer there and I guess they were eating the deer and he ate so much he couldn't fly away..They will do that and he probably got run over by a truck or car ...Sara