Carl Fraser Poet Rhyme

Frozen

As I walk across the frozen lake
The ice crunches neath my feet   
I walk towards a barren horizon
As a  cold wind brushes against ruby cheeks
Lost deep in thoughts so scrambled
I've no sense of time at all
The cold and dark envelop my soul
I'm  barely conscious when I fall
I feel no cold sensations
Just an overwelming warmth so deep 
I surrender to angelic arms
As I give in to blissful eternal sleep
 I look down upon my frozen body 
As I drift towards the heavenly skies   
I think of my empty life encased in ice
It was a fitting way to die.

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Poet Destroyer A January 22, 2016 at 11:19 PM This is more than a GREAT WRITE my friend. I super thank you for being the best... PS.. I love this line, "I surrender to angelic arms"

Poet Destroyer A January 22, 2016 at 11:17 PM Carl wherein thought you were with this write my friend this write is so alluring with the imagery I have in my mind the feel of drifting away from your body I felt part of this poem in my soul a very enjoyable read. Always your number one Fan... LINDA