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Frozen

As I walk across the frozen lake The ice crunches neath my feet I walk towards a barren horizon As a cold wind brushes against ruby cheeks Lost deep in thoughts so scrambled I've no sense of time at all The cold and dark envelop my soul I'm barely conscious when I fall I feel no cold sensations Just an overwelming warmth so deep I surrender to angelic arms As I give in to blissful eternal sleep I look down upon my frozen body As I drift towards the heavenly skies I think of my empty life encased in ice It was a fitting way to die.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/22/2016 11:19:00 PM
This is more than a GREAT WRITE my friend. I super thank you for being the best... PS.. I love this line, "I surrender to angelic arms"
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Date: 1/22/2016 11:17:00 PM
Carl wherein thought you were with this write my friend this write is so alluring with the imagery I have in my mind the feel of drifting away from your body I felt part of this poem in my soul a very enjoyable read. Always your number one Fan... LINDA
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