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Frozen

The latent pace of winter-tide drifts on, hibernal winds exhale a frosty dawn, the gentle warmth of summer’s long-since gone, now ‘midst the jagged ice the sun lies torn. Of broken heart she bleeds, to frigid pools, a weary spectral light for life to take; ethereal displays of winter jew’ls reflect her soul on tears of downy flake. Emotion spent she falls to deep repose, where afternoon dies young, bereft of light, ‘cept for a moonlight serenade that flows across the down that softly quilts the night. Encased within her dreams of grief and pain, a frozen world of beauty breathes in vain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/10/2011 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sharon. It is an honor to be on the list with you this week. May you find the inspiration to keep you writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2011 9:59:00 AM
Congrats Sharon on "Frozen" being featured. Vince
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Date: 6/7/2011 9:10:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Sharon.
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Date: 6/5/2011 5:37:00 PM
Congrats Sharon on your featured poem this week on PS. a great write to share with us all my friend with luv.. hope u are doing well my friend...
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Date: 6/4/2010 10:23:00 PM
Really sweet.........I like your use of words Roger x
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Date: 5/30/2010 1:44:00 PM
Your sonnets are really timeless, Sharon :) and like I said before, though I haven't experienced Winter literally, your poems always succeed in bringing me to that moment :) beautiful winter sonnet & your last couplet just shines :) post more of your sonnets please!
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Date: 5/30/2010 12:42:00 PM
I doubt I shall read a poem about Winter as I have just read for a good while. It's breathtaking Sharon >> James
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Date: 5/29/2010 7:29:00 PM
I like the flow of this sonnet poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 5/29/2010 10:29:00 AM
sad write, have a wonderful memorial weekend
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Date: 5/29/2010 7:48:00 AM
Magnificent! You utilize an extensive vocabulary to create precisely what you wish to convey. Such talent, Sharon. So glad you have chosen to share your work with us. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/29/2010 6:37:00 AM
The last two are very expressive and sums up what You have said before. Nice ending
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Date: 5/29/2010 4:38:00 AM
Lovely written poem, Sharon! Enjoyed reading it today and thank you for your comments! Have a nice Sunday and keep your creative pen flowing...Gert
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Date: 5/29/2010 4:03:00 AM
Nicely done wonderful poem and flow,,skat
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Date: 5/29/2010 1:05:00 AM
wow i like this full of meaning x sarah
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