Frozen

The latent pace of winter-tide drifts on,

hibernal winds exhale a frosty dawn,

the gentle warmth of summer’s long-since gone, 

now ‘midst the jagged ice the sun lies torn.

 

Of broken heart she bleeds, to frigid pools,

a weary spectral light for life to take;

ethereal displays of winter jew’ls

reflect her soul on tears of downy flake.

 

Emotion spent she falls to deep repose,

where afternoon dies young, bereft of light, 

‘cept for a moonlight serenade that flows

across the down that softly quilts the night.

 

Encased within her dreams of grief and pain,

a frozen world of beauty breathes in vain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 6:31 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sharon. It is an honor to be on the list with you this week. May you find the inspiration to keep you writing. Love, Carol
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June 9, 2011 at 9:59 AM
Congrats Sharon on "Frozen" being featured. Vince
Mehta Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 9:10 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Sharon.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 5:37 PM
Congrats Sharon on your featured poem this week on PS. a great write to share with us all my friend with luv.. hope u are doing well my friend...
Page Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 10:23 PM
Really sweet.........I like your use of words Roger x
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May 30, 2010 at 1:44 PM
Your sonnets are really timeless, Sharon :) and like I said before, though I haven't experienced Winter literally, your poems always succeed in bringing me to that moment :) beautiful winter sonnet & your last couplet just shines :) post more of your sonnets please!
Fraser Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 12:42 PM
I doubt I shall read a poem about Winter as I have just read for a good while. It's breathtaking Sharon >> James
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May 29, 2010 at 7:29 PM
I like the flow of this sonnet poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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May 29, 2010 at 10:29 AM
sad write, have a wonderful memorial weekend
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May 29, 2010 at 7:48 AM
Magnificent! You utilize an extensive vocabulary to create precisely what you wish to convey. Such talent, Sharon. So glad you have chosen to share your work with us. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 6:37 AM
The last two are very expressive and sums up what You have said before. Nice ending
Knop Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 4:38 AM
Lovely written poem, Sharon! Enjoyed reading it today and thank you for your comments! Have a nice Sunday and keep your creative pen flowing...Gert
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May 29, 2010 at 4:03 AM
Nicely done wonderful poem and flow,,skat
Hales Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 1:05 AM
wow i like this full of meaning x sarah
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