Sunlite Wanter Poet Quatrain

Frozen

Frozen

Frozen in time is the angry heart;
The anti-Valentine,
Keeping those who love apart,
For a held proud state of mind.

So close it is to a lover’s day,
Won’t you soften the resentful freeze,
Come close to me while you may,
Or I will be frozen, too, with thee.

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Jennifer Proxenos February 17, 2019 at 9:02 AM What a real life love poem - pride and stubbornness does not go hand in hand with love, a simple sorry does it all, especially when love is in the air and swirling all around - one last try to a heart that you hope will soften! Great poem, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Carole Duet February 17, 2019 at 12:23 AM i really like this one, Sunlite. Very clever: the "anti-Valentine". Carole :D

Elaine George February 16, 2019 at 4:45 AM Beautiful examples of this genre of poetry, Sunlite. Thank you for sharing. Elaine

Charles Messina February 13, 2019 at 8:51 PM As cold of a poem this sounds at first, it surely warms a heart in the end. Very nice SW. Charlie

Andrew Fairchild February 13, 2019 at 11:56 AM 'Frozen in time is the angry heart' -- I believe that! And I like your urging the frozen heart to go heal! Very nice piece!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2019 at 3:28 AM - A beloved writing, Sunlite ... never let your heart freeze :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands February 11, 2019 at 3:00 PM Well written Sunlite! :)

Arturo Michael February 11, 2019 at 1:59 PM Pile the wood on the fire...let the flames burn... Nice write Sunlite

Demetrios Trifiatis February 11, 2019 at 12:00 PM Love can easily defrost a frozen heart if we let it embrace us dearest, Sunlite ! A warmhearted poem that moves the mind!

Nette Onclaud February 11, 2019 at 11:52 AM awhh, sweetening this hearts' day with your amorous lines, sun... a poetic delight!...huggs