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Frozen

Frozen Frozen in time is the angry heart; The anti-Valentine, Keeping those who love apart, For a held proud state of mind. So close it is to a lover’s day, Won’t you soften the resentful freeze, Come close to me while you may, Or I will be frozen, too, with thee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/17/2019 9:02:00 AM
What a real life love poem - pride and stubbornness does not go hand in hand with love, a simple sorry does it all, especially when love is in the air and swirling all around - one last try to a heart that you hope will soften! Great poem, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/17/2019 12:23:00 AM
i really like this one, Sunlite. Very clever: the "anti-Valentine". Carole :D
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Date: 2/16/2019 4:45:00 AM
Beautiful examples of this genre of poetry, Sunlite. Thank you for sharing. Elaine
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Date: 2/13/2019 8:51:00 PM
As cold of a poem this sounds at first, it surely warms a heart in the end. Very nice SW. Charlie
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Date: 2/13/2019 11:56:00 AM
'Frozen in time is the angry heart' -- I believe that! And I like your urging the frozen heart to go heal! Very nice piece!
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Date: 2/12/2019 3:28:00 AM
- A beloved writing, Sunlite ... never let your heart freeze :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/11/2019 3:00:00 PM
Well written Sunlite! :)
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Date: 2/11/2019 1:59:00 PM
Pile the wood on the fire...let the flames burn... Nice write Sunlite
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Date: 2/11/2019 12:00:00 PM
Love can easily defrost a frozen heart if we let it embrace us dearest, Sunlite ! A warmhearted poem that moves the mind!
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Date: 2/11/2019 11:52:00 AM
awhh, sweetening this hearts' day with your amorous lines, sun... a poetic delight!...huggs
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