Froth

[This poem is based on 2 forms: Lanterne & ABC] Air Bubbles Coalesce Drifting down to Earth - - - - - - - - - - - - © 10th April 2019

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 12/5/2020 4:35:00 PM

Nicely done, Paul. This style looks a little tricky. Maybe one day I'll give it a try :)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/7/2020 2:35:00 PM

Thank you, Angela. I know you don't mind trying new poetry forms; I am sure you'll cope well with this one. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/13/2019 2:30:00 PM

And what huge drops sometimes fall heralding a fierce storm - Great lanterne Paul, I have yet to try writing one. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/16/2019 2:59:00 PM

So pleased that you enjoyed it, Jenny. I'll be watching out for your Lantern :) ~ Warm regards & hugs // paul

Edlynn Nau

Date: 4/13/2019 12:45:00 PM

Nice! I’ve been gone so long and it’s nice to come back and see you try all these different genre. I always say I’m going to do that instead of the 6 or 7 I stick to (need to get out of my comfort zone). This was fun and elegant.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/13/2019 4:50:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Edlynn. These short forms can be a lot of fun, so why not have a go at it :) Regards // paul

Supraja Kannan

Date: 4/12/2019 1:43:00 AM

How cute! Lovely lanterne, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/12/2019 4:49:00 AM

Thank you, Supraja. Have a nice day. Regards // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 4/11/2019 2:45:00 PM

love this, Paul - hope you are well, my friend

Paul Callus
Date: 4/12/2019 4:45:00 AM

Pleased you found it to your liking, my friend. Keeping well, thank you. Regards // paul

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 4/11/2019 12:03:00 AM

Am I the only one who took to blowing the bubbles immediately after reading this? Wow !! Bubbles are floating in the air and so is my heart.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/11/2019 1:44:00 PM

You are young at heart, Swetha! Take good care of the child within:) Thank you for a most pleasant visit. Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 4/10/2019 5:42:00 PM

lovely lantern Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 4/11/2019 1:33:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2019 5:08:00 PM

GREAT job, Paul. In fact, excellent!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/11/2019 1:13:00 PM

Thank you for the generous adjectives, Andrea! Indeed a pleasurable visit. Regards // paul

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/10/2019 5:05:00 PM

Well done Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 4/11/2019 1:12:00 PM

Thank you, Allen. Regards // paul

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/10/2019 4:10:00 PM

i do not share your memory, paul, but i enjoyed both your poem and the explanation you wrote to victor...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/10/2019 4:01:00 PM

Nice!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/10/2019 4:13:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Regards // paul