Froth

[This poem is based on 2 forms: Lanterne & ABC] Air Bubbles Coalesce Drifting down to Earth - - - - - - - - - - - - © 10th April 2019

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 12/5/2020 4:35:00 PM

Nicely done, Paul. This style looks a little tricky. Maybe one day I'll give it a try :)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/7/2020 2:35:00 PM

Thank you, Angela. I know you don't mind trying new poetry forms; I am sure you'll cope well with this one. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/13/2019 2:30:00 PM

And what huge drops sometimes fall heralding a fierce storm - Great lanterne Paul, I have yet to try writing one. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/16/2019 2:59:00 PM

So pleased that you enjoyed it, Jenny. I'll be watching out for your Lantern :) ~ Warm regards & hugs // paul

Edlynn Nau

Date: 4/13/2019 12:45:00 PM

Nice! I’ve been gone so long and it’s nice to come back and see you try all these different genre. I always say I’m going to do that instead of the 6 or 7 I stick to (need to get out of my comfort zone). This was fun and elegant.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/13/2019 4:50:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Edlynn. These short forms can be a lot of fun, so why not have a go at it :) Regards // paul