Sotto Poet Poet Haiku

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Frosty Wintry Scenes

hot tub on the deck
cold breeze strikes steaming water~
In the mist, souls waltz

gloomy day rainbow
quiet brook below your steps~
weepy willow trees

maybe the next day
the breeze will blow in my back~
so charming and swell

thunder and lightning
the rain comes down with fierce fists~
roof being blasted

Written: February 01, 2023

3rd place contest winner 

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Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Joanna Daniel February 3, 2023 at 8:57 PM I see this has won as it should, congratulations, Sotto:)

Jo Chamberlain February 3, 2023 at 11:46 AM Great imagery. Congratulations on your winning placement. :-)

Linda Alice Fowler February 3, 2023 at 10:52 AM Hey Lasaad. This is a brilliant write my friend. A hot tub on the deck midst the snow - wonderful. :) Congrats on the win! :)

Janice Canerdy February 3, 2023 at 9:16 AM Sotto Poet, you have perfectly described the bright side of dreary weather; it stimulates thoughts of better days! CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive piece. It's thirty degrees here (Potts Camp, MS)~~heat wave, compared to previous days! Janice

Valsa George February 3, 2023 at 12:08 AM "Rain coming down with fierce fists" ! I can imagine the force of rain lasing down. Powerful set of haikus, dear friend !

Joanna Daniel February 2, 2023 at 6:47 PM Lovely set of haikus, Sotto:)

Kim Rodrigues February 2, 2023 at 5:33 PM I love: the rain comes down with fierce fist

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 2, 2023 at 8:13 AM Lasaad, you've applied magical imagery, in creating these beautiful, contrasting scenes. So enjoyable. :)

Vijay Pandit February 2, 2023 at 6:08 AM Fabulous scenes you painted with these haiku poems my friend. Much enjoyed. Best to you, Lasaad.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 2, 2023 at 3:26 AM - Beautiful haikus, Las :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar February 2, 2023 at 12:57 AM A string of great haikus. Well done.

Andrea Dietrich February 1, 2023 at 5:01 PM I really enjoyed this set of Haiku, my friend.

Ann Peck February 1, 2023 at 4:41 PM Ah, "in the mist, souls waltz." So lovely, Lasaad!