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hot tub on the deck cold breeze strikes steaming water~ In the mist, souls waltz gloomy day rainbow quiet brook below your steps~ weepy willow trees maybe the next day the breeze will blow in my back~ so charming and swell thunder and lightning the rain comes down with fierce fists~ roof being blasted
Written: February 01, 2023 3rd place contest winner Your Decision Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 2/3/2023 8:57:00 PM
I see this has won as it should, congratulations, Sotto:)
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Date: 2/3/2023 11:46:00 AM
Great imagery. Congratulations on your winning placement. :-)
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Date: 2/3/2023 10:52:00 AM
Hey Lasaad. This is a brilliant write my friend. A hot tub on the deck midst the snow - wonderful. :) Congrats on the win! :)
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Date: 2/3/2023 9:16:00 AM
Sotto Poet, you have perfectly described the bright side of dreary weather; it stimulates thoughts of better days! CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive piece. It's thirty degrees here (Potts Camp, MS)~~heat wave, compared to previous days! Janice
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Date: 2/3/2023 12:08:00 AM
"Rain coming down with fierce fists" ! I can imagine the force of rain lasing down. Powerful set of haikus, dear friend !
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Date: 2/2/2023 6:47:00 PM
Lovely set of haikus, Sotto:)
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Date: 2/2/2023 5:33:00 PM
I love: the rain comes down with fierce fist
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Date: 2/2/2023 8:13:00 AM
Lasaad, you've applied magical imagery, in creating these beautiful, contrasting scenes. So enjoyable. :)
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Date: 2/2/2023 6:08:00 AM
Fabulous scenes you painted with these haiku poems my friend. Much enjoyed. Best to you, Lasaad.
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Date: 2/2/2023 3:26:00 AM
- Beautiful haikus, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 2/2/2023 12:57:00 AM
A string of great haikus. Well done.
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Date: 2/1/2023 5:01:00 PM
I really enjoyed this set of Haiku, my friend.
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Date: 2/1/2023 4:41:00 PM
Ah, "in the mist, souls waltz." So lovely, Lasaad!
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